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Hello everyone, this is my first story, and I decided to try it with two sims that I had move in a house that I had just built. I originally wanted to test the house and see how the house would work for the sims that I build it for and decided to take on a story.
This is the Ramaswami family, and they came with the game.
Please leave me your feedbacks, since it can't hurt but only help me improve.
So go on and read, I hope you enjoy.

Hello everyone, this is my first story, and I decided to try it with two sims that I had move in a house that I had just built. I originally wanted to test the house and see how the house would work for the sims that I build it for and decided to take on a story.
This is the Ramaswami family, and they came with the game.
Please leave me your feedbacks, since it can't hurt but only help me improve.
So go on and read, I hope you enjoy.
- Please tell me what you want. My wife and I just move here, we just wanted to start a new life, just tell me how much. Please, please.
- I'm just following orders, they want you dead. Sorry man.
I was in the shower when I heard a loud noise like gun shots. Then I said to myself, you're not in that jungle anymore, it's probably nothing.
But the thought wasn't even gone, when I heard another sound like a rifle.
I got dressed as fast as I could and went to check what was going on.
Little did I know...
Oh my God Sanjya, Sanjya. Honey, honey answer me. Somebody help me, help meeeee!
This is not happening, we came here for a better life and to start a family, you promised, you promised. Now get up, get up, you here me?
God please, don't take him away from me, he is all I've got, please, please don't do this to me. Please. I'm begging, please, I'll do what ever you want, please. Forgive him, forgive me, what ever we have done please forgive us, please have mercy. Please. - 911 what is your emergency?
- Hello, please help me, somebody just shot my husband and he is barely breathing hurry!
- Ma'am what is your address?
- 143 Canova Ave.
- Try talking to him, keep him with you, an ambulance will be there shortly.
God I don't know what it is that we have done but please let him live, please. Darling everything is going to be alright you here me, everything is going to be alright, just stay with me.
- I love you, I'm sorry, I... coucou could not keep my promise I...
- Don't talk like that, everything is going to be alright, I called the cops and the ambulance will be here shortly. You will be fine, just be strong for me, be strong.
- I don't want you to st...
Sanjya, Sanjya, no, no, God why, why?
Why, why, why? All we wanted was to be happy and grow old together and have kids and grandchildren. Now tell me why?
Who did this? Who did this?
Moments later the cops were there. As the police were looking around and investigating, all I could think about is what if I had come down when I first heard the noise, he probably could have been alive now. I probably could have save his life, I know that I could have save his life. It's all my fault, my fault. - I'm sorry what did you say officer?
- I know it's a difficult time for you right now Mrs. Ramaswami, but we are done for tonight. The only piece of evidence that we found was the rifle that the assassin left behind. Why is beyond me?
- Can we catch him or her with the gun?
- There's a possibility, so we sent it to the lab for examination and the results should be in, in two weeks or so.
- Two weeks! I want that murderer the day after tomorrow the latest.
- Ma'am I am very sorry for your lost, the ambassador was a very well respected man, but there is no way that we can get the results in sooner without mistakes and errors.
- Get out, out of my house, now!
-Try to get some sleep ma'am it will calm you down.
- Don't tell me what to do when you can't even do your job.
When they were all gone I felt the silence and took a look around and burst into tears. What am I going to do now in this big empty house?
Then the phone ring.
- Hello
- Mrs. Ramaswami?
- Yes
- I am Joe Carr, I am Marlique's police captain. For security reasons, we will have a police car stationed in front of your house Ma'am, even though you live in a gated area.
- Is that really necessary? I understand your concern, but the killer would actually be doing me a favor if he striked back and took my life as well. I don't even know why I am still alive, I was right there, heard the noise, but did nothing, nothing.
- Ma'am it's for your own good, and the community. Good night, and may God bless you.
After the conversation, I wiped my tears and went upstairs. The next morning, unable to sleep, I got up at dawn and went for my morning jog. Maybe that would help me clear my head and develop a paln to catch that... When I was coming back from my jog, the cops were still there.
- Good morning officer would you like a cup of coffee?
- Good morning Ma'am, how was your jog?
- Oh it was fine, so do you want to come in for that cup of coffee?
- I don't want to impose
- Oh com'on, after all it's the least I can do, after you stayed here and guard me last night. Besides you would be holding me company.
- Well thank you for everything officer, and send my greetings to your captain.
- You have a great day Ma'am.
- You too, bye.
After the officer left I went on to have breakfast. With all that happened last night, we didn't have dinner, I mean I didn't have dinner. So honey you didn't tell me how that project of yours went yesterday. How did the minister take the news? Sanjay - Ahh you know, he was reluctant at first but with a little convincing he came around.
Priya - So do you think that President will approve.
Sanjay - Most likely,
Priya - Well if all goes well we could go on that second honeymoon that we've been talking about. And if we're lucky maybe we will come back with little Sanjay in the oven. So what do you think? Sanjay? Oh dear God, was I talking to myself this whole time. God please, tell me it's a bad joke, tell me he's alive.
I really need to talk to someone.
- Hello, I would like to place an appointment with Linda St Val, this is the ambassador's wife, Priya Ramaswami.
- Oh hello Mrs. Ramaswami, it had been a while since we heard from you, How are you feeling today? This is Joy speaking.
- I'm fine thank you, so when is the earliest available?
- Oh give me one moment please, how does tomorrow at 2:45 sound?
- Tomorrow, I need to see her today.
- I'm afraid that it is impossible for today, Mrs. St Val has a flight later today, and will only be seeing two clients early today. Actually her 2:45 for tomorrow cancelled few minutes ago and that is why I can put you on for tomorrow if you wish.
- I need to see someone today
- May I suggest Mr. St Val?
- Oh I don't know, I'm loosing my mind here. I've heard that he's pretty good, but Mrs. is the one who has people lining up.
- Well Ma'am I...
- Oh alright, book me with Mr St Val for today
- OK, and how does 11:30 sounds?
- I'll be there, thanks.
- See you later Ma'am.

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Dec 1, 2007 by Feindina
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    4 Comment(s) posted so far

    #1 On Dec 2, 2007 qasert wrote:

    \:eek\:

    #2 On Dec 2, 2007 iluvhorses13 wrote:

    It's good! You might want to raise the quality on your pictures, but the plot is quite good!\:rah\:

    #3 On Dec 3, 2007 mssoftbrn wrote:

    \:rah\:

    #4 On Dec 8, 2007 iskrapercinkova wrote:

    \:rah\:

     
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