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This is a TS2 medieval story. If you don't like fairies, witches and mythological creatures, do not read it.
Baudwin, the older brother, now a teenager, knew all about Dale's feeling towards their sister Baudwin: You should not think this way, little brother. Brwanwen is a gift of God to our parents, you should rejoice that mother is now so happy. You 'll see, she will grow up and you two are going to play together
Dale: She stole my mama from me...and I can never forgive that...
Baudwin: Do not say that ever again, Dale!! She is our sisiter, no matter what you might think or feel about her!! Know that! In time it was difficult for King Daron to conceal that Baudwin was his favourite child. The beautiful prince was kind-hearted. He started to think about a possible marriage to his adored son.
And for Dale as well. Aliances throught marriage were the best one. Later on he would think of Branwen...
The two princes were almost adults now. Each one had his men-in-arms to command and Baudwin helped his father in the afairs of Estate, learning, thus, to be a good king when the time was right for him to be one. Not Dale. He was still the little prince.... But...unfortunately, the two brothers weren't very friendly anymore as they have been in childhood And all because of two women...their sister... ...and their mother An unfortunate surprise came to pass in an autumn afternoon...
The queen very saddened because she was the reason of the quarrel of her children, suddenly felt unwell and passed away before anybody could help her... Dale was inconsolable... because of the death of his mother, the Queen After that, the two brothers became almost undeclared enemies.
The king followed his queen the next winter and Baudwin became king Branwen became a fine girl... and she looked very much like her late mother, the queen.
The king her brother loved her very much.
Prince Dale hated her with all his heart and soul...and he had plans for both the king and the princess in mind... Dale: One day...one day the king will be....me... *The End of the Prologue*
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13 Comment(s) posted so far
#4 On Sep 29, 2009 Illandrya wrote:
Great start! Poor Dale, it can't be easy being the middle child and feeling less favoured by both parents. I'll be reading on to see what plays out next.
#5 On Oct 1, 2009 dizzydiana wrote:
great start, nice story
#6 On Oct 1, 2009 SandraR wrote:
Great story and great shots!!!
#7 On Oct 5, 2009 martoele wrote:
A very fine start with a lot of problems ahead. My compliments for the whole surrounding and set up. It really looks medieval. I would like to rate 6 but allas...
#8 On Oct 5, 2009 charray wrote:
Very good start
5.0 
#9 On Oct 6, 2009 drewsoltesz wrote:
Very good beginning, great use of custom CC, gave it a real authentic feel. And the princes are adorable, great job!
#10 On Nov 6, 2009 Little Seer wrote:
Looking forward to you working on this story and the other one also. Both are very interesting. Cheers!
#11 On Nov 11, 2009 elfa_mo wrote:
Amei Annie... Muito show!!
#12 On Feb 17, 2010 isarpgista wrote:
Annie, ainda não tinha visto esta história sua... Menina, maravilhosa!!!!!!!
[Annie, just now I read this story of yours... It's wonderfull!!!]
#13 On May 24, 2010 tishacat wrote:
Good start. Please write more.