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This is a Cindrella story featuring from left
Rose, Anna, Coral, Cinny Ella and Prince Charlie
Rose, Anna, Coral, Cinny Ella and Prince Charlie Coral and her twin daughters Anna and Rose had just arrived into Cinny Ella's life And Cinny Ella didnt like that one bit! One day Cinny Ella's dad became ill, he was just going to wrk when he dropped to the floor. As he lay on the ground dead the grim reaper came out of nowhere, Cinny Ella pleeded grim for her dad's life But the grim reaper won and Cinny Ella had never felt so alone. First her mother had died when she was little, now her dad was dead. Coral now owned everything of Cinny Ella's dads including her. Cinny Ella was forced to live in the kitchens and to do everything her stepmother asked her to do. She was told to make Breakfast, Lunch and Tea for Coral, Anna and Rose One day Rose didnt like what Cinny Ella cooked and started to cry, Coral got very angry with Cinny Ella and told her to make her somthing else for Rose. Cinny Ella picked up Rose's plate and got a big smile off Rose. Cinny Ella sat in her bed, she started to day dream. I hate Coral thought Cinny Ella. A few days later Coral got a visitor at the door. He handed over an envelope. Coral opened the envelope and read it. She got very excited when she had finished and looked at her daughter Rose. While Coral talked to Rose and Anna about the letter, Cinny Ella quickly had a look.
It said that every lady of the house was invited to a ball that Prince Charlie had conducted to find himself a bride. This is Prince Charlie if you don't know him already. He is the prince of all Simland. She asked Coral if she could go, "well.." said Coral. "I dont think so no"! Cinny Ella begged Coral to go. "Only if you do all the chores and more" replied Coral Cinny Ella was made to take out the rubbish. Do the washing up. And scrub the kitchen counters till they sparkled. Soon enough Cinny Ella, Anna and Rose had all turned into adults. Cinny Ella sat on her bed. Wow she thought to herself, this is it. Tonight is the ball and im going! She saw Coral, Anna and Rose come downstairs in their formal dresses ready for the ball. Coral looked at her daughters, "You look amazing" she said. "Tonight we will bag ourselfs a prince ladies".
Cinny Ella said "You look amazing". Coral saw Cinny Ella. "Oh Cinny Ella, you cannot come tonite". "why!" Cinny Ella asked "Because you are not allowed, You dont even have a dress to wear". "You dont think id really let you go did you?" Coral said. Cinny Ella got very upset. "Im not going?" She watched as they laughed out the door. She sat down at the table and started to cry. Suddenly she saw a flash of light and felt somthing touch her shoulder. It was the Queen Pixie. Cinny Ella was shocked "who are you"? "I am the Queen of all pixies and im here to make you go to the ball tonight", im so happy to see you laughed Cinny Ella. Cinny Ella went into the kitchen. "You need a dress to wear" said the Queen pixie "is this ok"? All of a sudden Cinny Ella saw a flash of light again. As a formal dress magically appeared on Cinny Ella. Wings suddenly attached themself's to Cinny Ella's dress. "Oh Queen pixie" Cinny Ella breathed, "thank you so much", "i look like an angel". "No problem", said the Queen pixie. "You are an angel, now go and have fun you deserve it love!" "oh and remember" the Queen pixie said "you have to be home by 9.00pm". "My magic can't last forever". With that the Queen pixie vanised. Meanwhile at the ball, Rose was dancing with Jack, she watched the prince who was watching her. Anna watched her sister curiously, and another woman was starting to watch Rose. Prince Charlie sat on his royal chair watching the sim ladies dance. He was a shy prince and didn't like to dance much. Rose ran over to the prince, "come and dance your highness". Coral watched her daughter in the background, she wispered "go on Rose"! As the prince was deciding he heard a gasp. "Oh God" said a woman who was near the door, "is that an angel"? Prince Charlie looked over. He also gasped, "WOW" he breathed. He ran to the door, he stopped and looked at the angel stood in the doorway. Everyone stopped what they were doing and started to stare. "Oh", Said Pricne Charlie "are you real"?, Cinny Ella replied "yes i am Prince Charlie. Nice to meet you". The prince hugged the angel, "Who are you i must know your name he questioned"! But Cinny Ella couldent tell him her name. Coral and her daughter Rose started talking about the mysterious Angel "Who is she"? Time soon flew by and Cinny Ella saw that it was 9.00pm already. She ran out the door quickly. And was gone before Prince Charlie knew it, he shouted ",
My angel. Come back"! Cinny Ella ran back home, her hair had changed back to its original hairdo. "Ahhh!" she screamed as the gown faded away and left her in the drags she wore everyday. She got home and went to her room, which was the kitchen. Soon she heard the others come back from the ball, they started laughing as they came in. "What a shame Cinny Ella didnt come" Coral laughed. Cinny Ella came in, she argued at Coral telling her that she was a horrible stepmother and that she would never do another chore again. Coral left Cinny Ella in tears as she made it quite clear that she still had to do chores, and now more then ever! A couple of months after, the Prince arrived at the door. The sisters quickly looked around and saw the prince. The Prince asked Coral if she knew the angel who had been at the ball last month. "Well no" said Coral "but my lovely daughters were there and they have so missed you your highness", "please come in and see them". The prince came in and saw Rose and Anna, he talked to them for a bit. Rose asked the prince if he would be interested in anyone else. "No" replyed the prince, "i just want to find my angel". The Prince then walked towards the door, "i better go now" said Prince Charlie, he looked back and saw a dirty plate on the table. "Where are my manners" he said. He took the plate into the kitchen and saw Cinny Ella. Coral and the others ran into the kitchen. Prince Charlie stood very still near Cinny Ella, he stared at her. "My angel" he wispered as he stroked Cinny Ella's cheek. "I know its you"! Love hearts filled the air as Cinny Ella and Prince Charlie looked at each other. Prince Charlie grabbed Cinny Ella and kissed her. Coral ran over to Cinny Ella. "How dare you she screamed" !! Prince Charlie got involved and shouted back at Coral. "I am the Prince of Simland and I demand you to leave Cinny Ella alone"! Coral backed off a little because she knew he was royalty and he could have her killed if she did anything to upset him. Suddenly Prince Charlie got on his hands and knees in the dirty kitchen and proposed to Cinny Ella. Cinny Ella screamed "yes i will"! A week later Cinny Ella and Prince Charlie got married. So this is the end of my sim tale... or is it ? Coral, Rose and Anna all became personal maids to Prince Charlie, all of them hated being bossed around and told to do chores. But this was their punishment. And Princess Cinny Ella and Prince Charlie lived happily ever after.
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47 Comment(s) posted so far
#38 On Nov 21, 2006 MoriaG wrote:
Nicely done!! I love the dresses and the hair!! The pictures go so well with the story. where did you get the little pixie, adorable!! great job on the old classic!! A 5 from me also!!
#39 On Nov 30, 2006 chellefleur wrote:
Thank you everyone for your lovely comments and hopefully i will be making a new story soon
#40 On Dec 7, 2006 gilysse wrote:
What an awesome story!!
#41 On Dec 13, 2006 Lily Fairy2 wrote:
Wow it's so cool! I like the way the evil steppy's get to be maids in the end i wonder if u cud do another fairy story like snow white? if u can it's up to u But i did luv it.
#42 On Dec 17, 2006 white_sands wrote:
Cute story! Love Cinny Ella's dress, where did you get it from?
#43 On Dec 17, 2006 white_sands wrote:
Keep forgeting to rate!
#44 On Jan 14, 2007 Pete789 wrote:
#45 On Jan 22, 2007 civetinja wrote:
Great story, wonderful costum !!Thanks !
#46 On Jan 31, 2007 wrote:
nice story
#47 On Jun 13, 2007 fairyofdeath wrote:
awsome