Stories / Chap. 3 - What About Yesterday
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Uploading this chapter got real screwy-
real quick.
So if you will do me a solid and read on:
I Hope You Enjoy!

Uploading this chapter got real screwy-
real quick.
So if you will do me a solid and read on:
I Hope You Enjoy!
 “What did you want with my abuela, anyway?”
“I don’t know; honestly, not much—I just thought—maybe they kept in contact. If Demetrius Carter had held on to anyone from his old life: it would’ve been her. He loved her very much. I don’t think he ever stopped.” He looked her in the eye, “I’m sorry for your—”
 “Listen, bobo, I appreciate it, but I don’t want your condolences. Gracias pero no gracias.”
“But—”
“Promise to remember my name?”
 “Sure, but I don’t even know—”
“It was one of my grandmother’s: Marisa. Will you remember?”
He nodded, “Marisa.”
“Buen.” He awoke to the post-dawn light. It was an overnight train ride and he was glad for the solitude. But blinked away the dream that followed him into wakefulness: Everything was still—he had arrived in Starlight Shores.
He dropped from his bed, checked to make sure he hadn't left anything, and headed for the nearest exit.

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Short right? Well, this chapter isn't done. It's got at least twenty more pages in it. Wondering why it's only seven pages weak? Uploading problems. They are as annoying as they read. I've been trying for the last two weeks, even managed to finish writing chapter 4, and I am currently in the middle of chapter 5. But alas, I am stuck. Because of this problem, and I am sorry you can't already be reading chapter four.
(However, I like this story too much to give up on it, so... keep an eye out for ensuing chapters/parts of chapters!)
Please. And Thank you!

Chap. 3 - What About Yesterday

Jul 8, 2012 by HumorMeh
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    2 Comment(s) posted so far

    #1 On Jul 9, 2012 spladoum wrote:

    Bummer!
    (If you tell me what upload problems you're having, though, I can usually help, or pull the ear of someone who knows what to do!)

    #2 On Aug 23, 2012 keishafeller wrote:

    Ok. Off to the next one.\:\)

     
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