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Ok so, The main character is NOT made by me, you can get her from Gos, shes super cute honestly. The other character is made by me.

Ok so, The main character is NOT made by me, you can get her from Gos, shes super cute honestly. The other character is made by me. The cage rattled back and forth as the wind whistled loudly. I didn't feel cold, not at all actually. Its physically impossible. I felt like an animal, caged up. I'm not an animal far from it actually. I do what I need to, to survive. Just like any normal person would, people eat animals yet some do not. But you have a choice and can survive without it, I cannot survive without what feeds me and my kind. The girl shook uncontrolable in the wind, I tried to distract myself by focusing on the bustling cars of the city down below but, thsi failed. i couldn't take my mind off her. My Bait, I knew I couldn't not even if I wanted to. Not even If I survived though it seemed my chances were very very low. Gripping the metal bars I sighed, knowing its the end isn't a pleasant feeling. The girl's teeth chatter as she wrapped her arms tighter around herself. I could smell her fear, she didnt want to die. So being stuck in a cage with a 'monster' was not on the top of her to do list. I couldn't resist I had to try, but no. I tried fighting my growing desire but I just wanted to be close. Just close. Maybe the desire would go away If I got close. I felt her silky brown hair tickle my pale skin, she had a lip peircing clearly an attempt to rebel obviously failed. She pushed my arm away but I quickly moved it back where I resisted her strength. Her legs shook and she dropped to the floor where I followed her down. She frowned and her eyes filled with tears. I put my hand ontop of hers trying to comfort the girl but I suppose it was hard when I was breathing onto her neck. I dropped onto the floor only a small distance away from her, I could hear her heart racing as I looked her straight in the eye. We never spoke and now never will. It was about to happen only a minute, One single minute of my life left. I stood sheilding ym face with my arms as the sun slowly pulled itself from behind the buildings of the city. It had not rose yet but it was coming. 10.9.8.7.6.5.4.3.2..... I felt myself become weaker and weaker untill the point I collapsed hitting the hard rock floor with my bare knees. The girl didn't flinch she just squeezed her knees and kept her eyes tight shut, leaving me at the end.

A Short Story

Oct 21, 2010 by lilgothgal99
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    6 Comment(s) posted so far

    #1 On Oct 22, 2010 Mangio wrote:

    Interesting \:rah\: Great characterisation and description. The pictures were wonderful. Predator resisting prey... \:wub\: What a wonderful read, can't wait for more \;\)

    #2 On Oct 22, 2010 mogan44 wrote:

    Awesome little short story.  I liked the descriptions.

    #3 On Oct 22, 2010 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Great story! \:rah\: Love it!

    #4 On Oct 23, 2010 Desu Baloney wrote:

    Very nice, beautiful pictures. \:D Can't wait for more...if there is more, that is. \:rah\:

    #5 On Oct 24, 2010 lilgothgal99 wrote:

    Nope, No more. Sorry.

    #6 On Nov 2, 2010 methura1 wrote:

    ...that was a little too short. Lol. I hope there's going to be a second part.

     
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