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Cinderella
Published Dec 14, 2010


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Cindy lives a sad life.

Cindy lives a sad life. You see, her kind Father married a witch. Not a real witch, a metaphorical one. She's an evil woman. But Father loves her so, and obeys her every command. She has two daughters, who are now her step-sisters. She cannot accept the fact that Cindy is more beautiful than they are and, in her rage, forces her to do all of the chores. At the same time, she lavishes her daughters with all of the latest gadgets, clothes and even lets them dye their hair unnatural colours! The Step-sisters have a gorgeous bedroom, and they sleep in large, comfortable beds. Cindy, on the other hand, sleeps on a little bed, with her room purely lit by candlelight. Cindy did have a car! However, it was horrible, unattractive and it didn't work. Unlike the Step-sister's Porsche Spiders. On one fine morning, Cindy was cooped up in the kitchen making waffles. While most chores were back-breaking and tedious, Cindy didn't mind cooking. That is, of course, if the food didn't burn in the oven. When food did burn, the wicked Step-mother forced Cindy to eat it. At that unfortunate moment, she strode into the kitchen, with her nose crinkled and her chin up. After glimpsing the burnt waffles, she slapped Cindy around the face.

"Stupid girl! You can't even make waffles!" Step-mother snapped.
Meanwhile, the ugly Step-sisters were lounging by the pool.

"Oh my god, we are, like, sooo hot, like!" said Chelsea, the one with the yellow hair.
"I know, like, we are, like, much prettier than that Cindy skank!" said Chardonnay, the one with the pink hair.
Suddenly, Chardonnay's phone rang. She got up to answer it.

"Hellooooo? What? A Christmas partay? Yeah I did just pronounce it like that! Oh my god, like! I'll see you later, babes!" she said.
Chelsea walked up to Chardonnay to see who was calling.

"Oh my god, babes, we have, like, totally been invited to Prince Charming's Christmas partay!" said Chardonnay, excitedly.
"Oh my god, is he, like, looking for a new Princess?" Chelsea asked.
"Oh my god, babes, how'd you know?"
"Who cares, like? We have a party to go to!"
Chelsea ran into the kitchen, where Cindy was rubbing her slapped cheek. She immediately hugged her mother.

"Mummy! Mummy! Oh my god, like, guess what?" Chelsea asked.
"What is it, dear?" Step-mother asked.
"Chardonnay and I have, like, totally just been invited to Prince Charming's Christmas Party!"
"A party?" Cindy and Step-mother both asked at the same time.
"Oh my god, like, shut up Cindy! You're obviously, like, not invited!
That night, Chelsea and Chardonnay put on the most hideous outfits you will ever see. They put on even more make-up, and they brushed their teeth multiple times. Despite their make-overs, they still looked like circus-rejects. But they thought they were as attractive as a magnet, and Step-mother and Father both agreed. After being kissed and waved goodbye, they jumped in Chelsea's Porsche and drove to the Christmas Party. Cindy, on the other hand, was forced to stay at home and do the chores. Once she had completed her chores, she lay down on her uncomfortable bed and dreamed of a better life.

"I wish I could go to the party." she thought.
Suddenly, in a flash of purple light, an old woman in a starry kimono appeared out of nowhere. In her shock, Cindy stood up.

"Who are you?" she demanded.
"I am your Fairy Godmother! Cindy, you shall go to the party!"
"What on earth do you mean?" Cindy asked.
"I, my dear, am going to use my magical powers to allow you to go to the ball!" the Fairy
"Hang on a minute! If you're a fairy, where's your wings?"
"Dear, I lost them in a horrible accident involving Sleeping Beauty. It's not a good thing that she sleepwalks!"
"Okay, I get it. But how can I go to the party? I'm only a lowly servant girl."
"First, I shall change your rags into a stunning gown. Second, I shall turn that hair into that of a movie star's! Finally, I shall transform your car into a flashy sports car!"
The Fairy Godmother stuck to her promise and Cindy's rusty old car was transformed into a bright orange Sports Car! Never in her life had Cindy seen anything so beautiful.! Cindy's dress and hair were also magically transformed!

"This is great! Thank you ever so much!" Cindy beamed.
"Cindy, there is something you should know. This spell is temporary, and when the clock strikes midnight, you shall be transformed back to normal. Now, you'd best be off! Enjoy the party!"
At the party, the Ugly Step-sisters boogied to the loud music playing. Prince Charming was also there, with only one thing to do. He asked all the women a bit about themselves. The most beautiful girl with the most beautiful personality would be asked if they would like to become a Princess. At one moment, by pure coincidence, Prince Charming bumped into Chelsea, who was grabbing a large plate of cookies (although trying to make it look like she was eating salad.

"Oh my god, like, it's you! My name's Chelsea! How d'you do?"
"Um, okay thanks." Prince Charming replied.
Noticing that her sister was chatting to Prince Charming, Chardonnay strode over to them both.

"Oh my god, like, I see you've met my sister! We're pretty much exactly the same. Except I'm nicer than her. And better in general, like." Chardonnay said.
In her rage, Chelsea started a fight with Chardonnay, but it didn't look like she was winning. At that very moment, a beautiful figure strolled into the room. People looked in awe to see who she was. It was Cindy. She knew that, but nobody else in the room did. The Ugly-stepsisters stopped fighting for a moment to gape at the figure. "Hello there," said Prince Charming. "I don't believe we've met."
"I'm, uh, Cinderella. It's a pleasure to meet you!" Cindy replied.
"Would you care for a dance?"
"I'd be honoured and delighted simultaneously!"
Dancing to their favourite songs, Cindy and Prince Charming dance the night away! But it seems that phrase was turned literal when Cindy felt some changes. It was midnight! Her beautiful hair tied itself back, and her gown changed back into her apron. Knowing that her sports car now no longer worked, she ran home, crying her eyes out. The next day, things were back to normal. Cindy was busy doing her chores. Laundry, in this case. Chelsea and Chardonnay were now the best of friends, and exercising together. Whilst walking down the hall, Cindy noticed somebody loitering in the front yard. She went to shoo them off before she noticed who it was. It was Prince Charming! Cindy quickly fixed her hair, and adjusted her clothes. Cindy nervously approached him.
"Um, can I help you?" Cindy asked.
"It's you!" Prince Charming exclaimed.
"Um, yes it is! Who am I?"
"You're the girl from the party!"
"How can you tell? Did I drop one of my shoes?"
"You were wearing shoes?"
"Never mind."
"I can tell because of your natural beauty. The chemistry we had yesterday was incredible. Can't you tell?" he said.
"Can I ask you something?" Cindy asked.
"What?"
"Kiss me."
The kiss felt like it was from a movie. For the first time in her life, Cindy felt appreciated. She wanted the feeling to last forever. She wanted to be with Prince Charming forever. As you say, the deal was sealed with a kiss. The happy couple then ran off in the distance together, and they all lived happily ever after.

The End.

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#7ice_loveDec 19, 2010

^w^ love it!

#8J0u_4n4Dec 21, 2010

I love It...
Good Job
\:wub\:

#9schizophrenic14Dec 23, 2010

wow! it has nice twist of story.. i love this classic tale since I'm a little child \:wub\:

#10viktoretkaJan 2, 2011

Aw amazing story \:wub\: I remember how when i was little i watched the movie every single day.. \:wub\:

#11hsmroxyJan 2, 2011

I totally love your story!!! And the Cinderella tale...so nice!

#12Kayla_MarieJan 4, 2011

this is a great story i love the twist

#13Scarlet1000Jan 9, 2011

ohh, I loooove it!! how'd you get all the wavy line and magic?

#14TUTULAFeb 17, 2011

Nice story\:wub\:

#15lemon_angelSep 1, 2011

Wow.. Nice story \:\) You make it more modern \:D

#16Audrey MaySep 18, 2011

 "You were wearing shoes?"  LOL!!!   Another great fairytale, Jack! \:rah\:

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