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I married a MUMMY! Part 4
Published Nov 9, 2010


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What I saw was shocking! Okay, it was a corridor. But there was something strange and peculiar about this corridor. It was...

What I saw was shocking! Okay, it was a corridor. But there was something strange and peculiar about this corridor. It was... Purple! I'd never seen a purple corridor before. It was very weird. Even weirder, the light was coming out of a seemingly normal torch. I bravely walked through the door, completely ignoring the message on the little stone plaque. The next room was filled with dive pools! One was purple, the same colour as the other room. I instantly knew that it was the right pool. I asked Mummy if he wanted to dive in. But he was instantly in. I wondered to myself if mummy's could hold their breath longer than humans. I guess I must have been right, as Mummy was in there for over an hour! After an hour had passed, he surfaced, and climbed out. I let out a big sigh of relief.

"Where were you? You were over an hour! Are you able to breathe?" I asked.
"What's breathing?" he asked.
"Supplying oxygen to your lungs."
"Lungs? Heck, I had those taken out a few millenniums ago!"
"I get it! Did you find any treasure?"
"No, just a little switch."
At that exact moment, a hidden door opened! We were now able to advance into the next room. It was another purple corridor. With ease, we slid down the corridor, as quiet as possible. We were also observant, making sure that there were no traps. The next room was like an Egyptian dining room. It probably was an Egyptian dining room. But the door required a keystone, one which he had not stumbled upon yet. I thought that we were stuck. It was time to head back. Luckily, Mummy was already on the move, and inspecting for any secret doors. He found a hidden door! Inside was a (very) old toilet, which I think somebody died in, but there was also a keystone! I put the keystone in it's place, and it glowed bright blue. And the lock moved aside, allowing us entry to the next room! I couldn't wait to get out of here! I'm sure that we had overcome the worst anyway... But I was so wrong! Fire traps, stone walls, statues! Is this supposed to be certain death? Okay, it's a tomb, they are supposed to be ridden with traps - but how is a mummy supposed to live here? Glancing over at the poor soul, I felt tears trickle down my face. Then I realised that it was just sweat from the fire... In the midst of all the heat and chaos, Mummy and I worked hard to solve this riddle! We shifted and pulled, and we eventually unlocked another door! In this room was a very long flight of Egyptian stairs. I could feel them crumbling beneath my feet, but I was determined to proceed! As I reached the top of the stairs, I noticed one door.

"This is it. It's time to find the treasure." I thought.

I played some action music in my head, and opened the door in slow motion.
The action music in my head changed to a fanfare of trumpets and choirs singing. Before me stood a massive, beautiful Anubis statue.

"Do you have the Soulpeace to cure your curse?" Mummy asked.
"What do you mean?" I asked anxiously.
"You only come in here to reverse a Mummy's curse!"
"Are you trying to tell me that we came all the way over here for nothing?"
"Oh come one! Don't black out on us! I have a honeymoon to enjoy! Please don't do this! Is this the end of the series? Please say I'm having another chapter!"

(The answer: Probably)

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#4fredbrennyNov 10, 2010

LOL..."Are you trying to tell me that we came all the way over here for nothing?"
Give her the extra chapter(s) Jack! \:D It was hilarious! Great!!!

#5MangioNov 11, 2010

What a lovely installment \:wub\: The screens were amazing \:rah\: I hope they didn't come all this way for nothing. Can't wait for more \;\)

#6xxheartlessxx12Nov 12, 2010

There definitely needs to be more chapters! I love this! So hilarious! 5.0! \:rah\:

#7muiseNov 13, 2010

will it be continued?

#8YrS92Nov 13, 2010

lol, I do hope you give her some extra chapters... So funny\:D Keep up the great work\:wub\:

#9martoeleNov 15, 2010

More please, more..... but not with 9 months between this chapter and the next one... \;\) I had to look for the first 3 parts to remember the storyline. That's why it took me so long before reading this chapter! \:D

#10Peachybitz1Nov 17, 2010

I have a toilet like that!!  \:D \:D

#11Peachybitz1Nov 17, 2010

And I'm pretty sure something has died in it  \:D \:D

#12Peachybitz1Nov 17, 2010

Fab Story! Rib Tickling ending \;\) Rating 5 for the smiles invoked \:D

#13TaroianJan 30, 2011

I can't wait to see the ending \:\) good luck hope you find another soulstone somewhere around the corner

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