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She loves you...She loves you not: Pt3
Published Jul 12, 2009


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This part took longer than expected due to site crashing mid story yet again! Thanks for all the support, custom content and comments. Cheers x

This part took longer than expected due to site crashing mid story yet again! Thanks for all the support, custom content and comments. Cheers x Jacob and Katie had been inseparable when they arrived home from their trip. Katie was at work and Jacob was making his phone calls and sorted out what he needed organsing behind Katie's back. He was worried, panicky and stressed about how Katie would react. He didn't expect Henry the Butler to say that Jenna James was waiting on the back porch and wanted to speak to him.

"Jenna? Ummm...hi!" Jake smiled politely.

"Hi you," Jenna flirted.

"You ok?" Jake asked confused as Jenna moved closer.

"I have been thinking about you," Jenna replied.

"Me?!" Jake asked shocked, "Why?"

"I was thinking we should get together, you love Katie and I love Alex, what better way to get to them than us getting together," Jenna said pressing against Jake.

"Look Jenna, I am flattered but..." Jacob blushed as Jenna moved in closer.

"Mmm, don't resist me," Jenna smiled sexily as she jumped into his arms.
"You belong with me," Jenna whispered in his ear and Jacob froze. He held her in his arms and felt flattered a girl like Jenna would want him. He sort of had a deep desire to be with her, despite loving Katie as much as he did. He was male and had urges too, Jenna could fulfill them. In this time he didn't see Katie arrive home early from work. "What the....?!?" Katie said angrily as she saw Jenna in her fiance's arms. She felt hurt, betrayed and angry all at once. Hot tears filled her eyes and stung her eyes as they poured down her cheeks.

"It's not what you think..." Jake said putting down Jenna.

"Jake of course it is baby, I best go, lots of love," Jenna said leaving smugly and glared at Katie.
"Jake...how could you?" Katie said sobbing, "I thought you loved me?"

"I do, seriously she came onto me," Jake begged, "It all happened so fast."

"I hate you so much for this..." Katie cried irrationally.

"No you don't," Jake said touching her arm softly.
"Don't touch me!" Katie cried angrily moving away from him, "You disgust me, how could you?!"

"Katie please, believe me, it was nothing," Jake pleaded.

"You will NEVER touch me or hurt me again," Katie retorted, "I am leaving, here take this ring, I don't want it."

"Noooooooo," Jake said grabbing Katie and preventing her from leaving but she brushed him off.

"No Jake...l-l-l-l-l-ll-leave me alone," Katie said tears streaking her pretty face, "If you cared about me that much you'd give me that."
Jacob backed off, he owed her the time and space to calm down. His heart was broken by a foolish mistake and he broke down. He wasn't ashamed to, he was devastated. Infact Jacob was pretty much in that way for the next few days. He tried his best to contact Katie but she wouldn't answer. She was with Alex and he offered to talk to her but Jacob knew she was too stubborn to speak to him. Jacob kept himself busy and finally the big day game along. He was so nervous but he knew the hard work was worth it. It was perfect. His whole heart and soul was in this. Plus Alex had been a great help too. Alex had told Katie they were going to an important party and convinced her to come along. She had no idea what was planned. "Where are we?" Katie said confused after Alex smooched her.

"You'll see," Alex smiled leading Katie inside the strange building.

"Oh my....oh wow...that's my....oh," Katie said excited as she entered the colorful and familiar rooms.
"My paintings, on display, how did you...?" she asked Alex puzzled.

"I have connections," Alex beamed.

"Oh it's wonderful, all these people, here to see it," Katie blushed.

"I know, I helped organise it, but Jake needs to take most of the credit," Alex said.
Katie glanced aroud the busy room and saw Jake talking to Jenna. She felt angry and happy at the same time. Happy he'd done this for her, angry they were together.

"Look Jenna," Jacob said out of Katie's earshot, "I don't wanna be with you, ok?"

"Ok Jake, you're a better guy that I thought," Jenna admitted defeated.

"You'll find your prince," Jake assured her, "Now let me show you the art work.
"She has a talent," Jenna admitted as she admired Katie's art with Jake and the other visitors.

"Katie's over there, go see her," Jenna told him.

"Thanks Jenna," Jake smiled heading to Katie.
"Hi Katie," Jake said nervously, "You should take a look around...I mean...not that you need to..they're your..Look Katie, I'm sorry."

"It's fine Jake," Katie told him.

"Is it? Do you know how much I have missed you?" Jake said sadly.

"I missed you too," Katie admitted. They had both missed one another.
"It's good to see you two speaking again," Alex said as he came over, "Speech time!" He got the attention of the room and spoke about how amazing Katie was.

"Welcome friends, to the amazing art of my beautiful girlfriend Katie. I hope you appreciate it as much as we do. Now I have the attention of you all there's something I want to say to Katie."
"Alex?" Katie asked confused.

"Hear me out!" Alex said raising his hand.
Then he dropped to his knees and Katie stood there shocked and confused.

"Katie, will you do me the honour of being my wife?" Alex asked softly. Katie was shocked and didn't know what to say. She loved Alex, he was kind to her, but what about Jake? She panicked. She glanced at everyone's faces and their emotions were a mix of excitement and hope.
"You can't deny me in front of all these people," Alex joked as he handed her the box. And deep down she couldn't. Katie did love Alex after all and he hadn't hurt her like Jake had. "I will," Katie said quietly avoiding Jake's gaze.

"That a yes?" Alex beamed.

"Yes," Katie said louder as the room burst into applause.
Alex got up and kissed Katie passionately in front of everyone.

"Congratulations," she heard Jake say to Alex, "You got a great girl you know." Katie could sense the hurt in his voice but his face hid the heartbreak well.

"I know man," Alex said happily as he shook Jake's hand.

"I best go, got to get to work promoting and mingling," Jake apologised taking one sad look at Katie before heading off.

"Bye Jake," Katie managed to croak.
Alex lifted Katie off the floor happily in a hug.

"I'll make you so happy," he told her.

"You already do," Katie replied, "I best go mingle too."

As Katie headed to meet the people at the party, she tried her best to hold herself together. Her mind was full of different memories. Jake's said and hurt face, Alex's happy one, the guest's excitement. She did her best to keep herself together. She'd made her choice and she had to stick with it.

End of part 3 :D

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#1maxi kingJul 13, 2009

\:wub\:great part!\:wub\:

#2MangioJul 13, 2009

Great part. Im glad Katie found love with Alex. \:wub\:

#3JillebethVIPJul 13, 2009

I hope she decides that Jake is the one for her.  Alex is a nice guy, but Jake and Katie seem to be meant for each other.   Great chapter.  I knew that Jenna was going to be trouble, but thought it would be between Alex and Katie.  Looking forward to the next installment.

#4kanzenJul 13, 2009

poor girl @-@ she was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. she might have thought about it, but the crowd was staring her down!

#5smiley00girlJul 13, 2009

Great part! I loved it! Can't wait for more! \:D

#6candy820Jul 13, 2009

Great part! \:D Waiting for the next part.\:D

#7yacco69alJul 14, 2009

you are good. i love your part 

#8omik79Jul 14, 2009

poor jacob \:\(  Great part tho..MORE Please \:\)  Awesome job!

#9Sweetie224playerJul 14, 2009

Nice story, but you take 3.0 from me...\:confused\: Keep working my friend...keep working...\:wacko\: I'm sooo sorry...\:\(

#10charrayJul 26, 2009

Very good part \:\)

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