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From Inside Goth manor Chapter two
Published Nov 10, 2009


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HollyHoskinson

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Then before anyone knew it Gunther and Lolita were teenagers,my grandparents tried long and hard to seperate them,but their love for one another was just too strong.

Then before anyone knew it Gunther and Lolita were teenagers,my grandparents tried long and hard to seperate them,but their love for one another was just too strong. Lolita blossomed into an energetic,virbant young lady,my father said that she had energy to burn and was always looking out for others.She was a little flirty,childish and a bit of a girly girl,that's what attracted him in the first place. Gunther,however,adopted a darker look and lifestyle.He started coloring his hair,dressing in black and listening to loud music.Victor was never around much anymore,work had him tied up most of the time,it seemed like he was always at the office.Gretle tried to be there for him,but it just wasn't enough The Crumplebottom girls also started to rebel,but in different ways.Agnes started hanging out with the debutante,trendy types.She proudly spent more money on clothing than any other teenage girl I had ever heard of.Cornelia,however,ran with the same crowd as my father,they snuck into clubs and pretty much did whatever they wanted,the police knew better than to touch them. Agnes was much more quiet and subdued than my mother,Cornelia was more of the social one,and once again,more of the outcast.But as sisters they are very close,so whenever Cornelia needed her,she would always try to help out,even if others were hurt in the process. There was a small community fishing hole and playground on the other side of the tracks that pretty much every teenager frequented,one day Cornelia ran to her sister and complained that Lolita was running around bragging that she was going steady with Gunther. "What would you care?"Agnes countered "Aren't you two just friends? I mean,honestly,I don't understand your whole colored hair crowd" "Yes,I am just his friend,his BEST friend in fact"Cornelia said,expressing both shock and dismay that Agnes had dared to question her judegment"But whenever I look at them I see poor white trash trying to snag herself a rich husband,she's only interested in his money and name,that's it,I have to protect him". Meanwhile,Lolita was just minding her own buisness and enjoying the park. Agnes was the first to grab her,she began to taunt her while my mother looked on. My mother was next,they way they picked on her was cruel and uncalled for,but neither one of them would ever express remorse for it,even when they got older."Go home,patches,your kind isn't wanted here".Cornelia taunted Gunther called Lolita over early the same evening,"You woulden't believe how I was treated by those awful Crumplebottom girls".She told him "I don't know how you can even associate with them". "Don't worry".Gunther reassured her "I'm just friends with Cornelia because I feel sorry for her,I love YOU,I want to marry YOU,I want you to the mother of my children,not HER,she's a buddy,nothing more".Just before he said goodbye he added "And my parents will just have to deal with that". Meanwhile,later on at the Crumplebottom estate Cornelia snuck out with Gunther. Gunther showed up in a "borrowed" car,they went downtown They were out the entire night and into the early morning hours,they snuck into all of the meanest dives downtown. They watched some fights...... and even got into some of their own.Actually,it was my father who beat up a townie,much to Cornelia's delight. Gunther had never enjoyed himself as much as he did that night,him and Cornelia were growing closer and closer,his feelings for her were starting to deepen.That was when he started to wonder about how real his relationship with Lolita was,did he actually love her? Or did his heart belong with Cornelia? He certainly hoped things would change by the time they were in college......

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#1The Simsss FanNov 10, 2009

Good story\:rah\:

#2martoeleNov 11, 2009

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#3blossom6676Nov 13, 2009

oohhh i lik the cliffhanger! but i cant wait for the next part!

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