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Published Dec 30, 2009


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I hope you enjoy the start of my story

I hope you enjoy the start of my story This is me with my mum when we went on holiday. My father left my mother when she was pregnant, apparently he could not handle the responsibility of a child then!! I never felt like I had missed out not having a father, my mum provided everything for me I didn't need anything else. She called me Illori which means 'Speacial treasure' but shes my special treasure. This was the last picture I have of me and my mum...... Next thing I know Im sitting at my mums funeral with my grandmother 3 weeks after we had been on holiday. She had got knocked down on her way home from work by a driver using his phone! She was instantly killed. My Grandmother Rosa became an amazing support for me especially at the funeral. She almost made me think that eventually my life would able continue with some form of normality after such a tragic event. At this time though that thought seemed a million miles away. I had lost my mother and my best friend, who was going to direct me? who could I confide in now? I was only 17 years old I had lost my whole world from this day on my life had changed whether I liked it or not. That evening Rosa insisted that I moved in with her. Her house was small but very homely. Rosa was amazin she gave me her biggest bedroom so that I could have my own space. For the next few days I didnt really do much. I stayed in my room sleeping all the time. I thought that when I was slepping at least I would not be thinking about my mum. My grandmother would never say anything she knew that her presence was just enough. the days turned into months and I eventually I ventured out to the living room. Rosa always ensured that there was food there if I needed she was amazing but I still felt like I couldnt function, that there was point to doing anything. On the day of my 18th Birthday I decided to go to my mums grave for the first time. It was strange I missed my mum so much but I couldnt bring myself to go visit her grave. Rosa convinced me that it would be a good idea.... and it was I felt slightly better. Rosa cooked me some dinner and asked how my visit went. Rosa went to my mums grave everyday whether it was to take flowers or to tidy it!typical mum! When having dinner Rosa said that maybe a job would do me good, give me something to concentrate on I now had the choice to make somthing of my situation... and so the next day I decided to see if there were any jobs locally. After about the 6th day of looking I eventually found a job in The Loft Bar. It was Wednesday, Friday and Saturday nights which I didnt mind as I didnt have a social life anyway! Hope you are enjoying my story and i'll try get part 2 completed asap. Thank you please leave any comments

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#10charrayFeb 1, 2010

Very good start \:\)

#11Golden97Feb 2, 2010

Great start , i was thinking of reading this ages ago but i forgot so im going to read to chapter 5 today \:D

#12starfall34Feb 5, 2010

Ba Nanas! That was awesome! Good job! Second please!\:rah\: \:P \:D

#13isarpgistaFeb 16, 2010

Wow!!! Great story! Awesome!!! \:D

#14PreetlatesFeb 28, 2010

I read a later chapter before I found this one today, but i really enjoyed it. You set the story well.

#15Divinefelinep.Apr 29, 2010

very nice start!\:\)

#16Nov 27, 2010

enjoyed

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