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"The Curse" part 1
Published Mar 11, 2010


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nkotb16

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Alrighty here is the part 1. also this is to follow the preview so if you read the preview you'll know how it started. The cover isn't like the best, but it'll do. I don't know how to make good covers for stories lol =D also if you dont mind to look at my blog about my game. I need help, and if i don't get it fixed idk if i could do part 2 which will really stink. anyway i hope you enjoy part 1 and please let me know what you think. It helps a lot!! =D thnx!!
NOTE* sorry if i messed anything up =D

Alrighty here is the part 1. also this is to follow the preview so if you read the preview you'll know how it started. The cover isn't like the best, but it'll do. I don't know how to make good covers for stories lol =D also if you dont mind to look at my blog about my game. I need help, and if i don't get it fixed idk if i could do part 2 which will really stink. anyway i hope you enjoy part 1 and please let me know what you think. It helps a lot!! =D thnx!!
NOTE* sorry if i messed anything up =D
When she was done talking she turned back around and started walking away again.

Today had to of been the creepiest day ever....officially! 'Great I'm going crazy now, what's next?' i had thought to myself.
I started thinking more about what she had said. It didn't make any since to me.

I was watching her walk away. She started to fade as she kept walking. The weird part is she pretty much disappeared out of thin air.

I had to blink a couple of times to make sure i wasn't asleep. Even that didn't help me realize what had happened.
I had decided that i was going to head home and go to sleep. I had to make sure i blew this whole thing off. I didn't want to keep thinking about it.

Eveytime i didthnk about it, i just kept thinking i was crazy.

I was so tired tonight. I have never been this tired in my life. It was really weird.
Today i had woke up bright and early. I felt so much better than i did before.

I heard a knock on my door. "Come in." I yelled. My dad walked in when i said it. "Oh, what do you want?" I asked looking at him.

"I was just making sure you were okay." He answered me with concern on his face. "Why do you care?" I snapped at him.

"Son you have been asleep for two days, why wouldn't I be concerned?" He asked again with worry in his tone.
My dad kept standing there looking at me.

"What?" I had said again. "It's just you look older, more mature." he said with curiousity as he spoke.

I gave him a weird look and told him to leave. He walked mumbling to himself about something.
My dad walked out of my room and i sat there thinking there had to be something wrong. Why did i sleep for two days? And why did i look different?

I was confused about all of this. I couldn't think of nothing that happened to me from the last two nights. Everything was a blur and it didn't make since.

I had to go look in the mirror for myself.
I headed to the bathroom to have a look for myself. I wasn't sure what i was going to see and i wasn't prepared if it was bad.

I opened the bathroom door and walked in. I walked over to the mirror and looked at myself. There wasn't anything that was wrong. i looked like me.

However, I did look older and more mature than before. I was surprised at what i was looking at.
I went to close my eyes just to make sure it wasn't me just imaging things.

When i closed my eyes, I had a flashback of a voice saying 'The love you must seek, the curse you may break.'

I flashed my eyes open fast. I didn't know what that was, and it creeped me out a little. I looked around my bathroom. "Hello?" I said out loud.

I was just making sure i was the only person in here.
I stood there for a moment more and looked at myself. 'I can go girl hunting.' i smiled to myself.

But first i needed to go to the library to look up riddles. I got dressed and headed to the library.

Wheni got there i went to grab a book about riddles and sat down to read it. It was very interesting.

I'm not big on reading, but this book was very good. It had so much information that i thought i needed.
Two hours had gone by and i found nothing that i needed to figure out this riddle i heard.

I walked outside and down the steps. as i was walking i saw a woman staring at me. As i was walking i was looking in her direction wondering why she was staring at me.

As soon as i had turned around to watch where i was going, i had knocked into someone.

"Oh, I am so sorry." I heard a woman's voice say. I looked upand saw a woman standing there smiling. She was gorgeous.

I couldn't help but stare at her. "Are you okay?" She asked me. I shook my head to get out my little trance.

"Oh yeah, sorry." i said smiling at her.
"I'm Rachel." She said smiling at me. I smiled back again. "I'm Arius." I couldn't stop looking at her.

"It's very nice to meet you Sir....err Arius." She kept smiling at me. She must have been a real bubblely person. "So what are you here for?" She asked me with her smile disappearing.

"I was trying to find out more about this riddle I have here." I said and showed her the piece of paper I had with the riddle written down on it.
She took the piece of paper and looked at it. "Um, I'm not to sure about this," She said still looking at it.

"I do know it has something to do with finding true love." She told me. She kept on looking at the piece of paper in deep thought.

I was happy that I found someone that could probably help with this mystery riddle.
We stood there a minute more. "Well Iím not to sure, but good luck on figuring this out." She said handing me the paper back.

"I better get going, I have to be somewhere." We said bye and she left.

I looked over my shoulder to see if that woman was still standing there. I had to glance twice because she had disappeared from where she was standing.

I have never been so confused in my life about anything.
I looked at the paper. 'Man I should have gotten her number.' I had thought to myself.

As soon as I had said that a womanís voice spoke. "Turn it over." I looked at the paper and turned it over like she had said to.

I was surprised to see that she had written down her number. She must have written it down when I wasn't looking.
I looked over my shoulder and saw that woman standing there again.

She was really starting to creep me out. I didn't know what she wanted from me.

I closed my eyes and turned my head away from that area.

When i closed my eyes i had a flashback of my walking in the park late at night. I wondered if this had anything to do with what was happening to me.

And why i had heard that voice. I didn't know, but i was going to find out at some point.
I flashed my eyes open again and looked straight ahead from where i was standing.

I looked over to where she was standing to see if she was still there. And again.....she wasn't there.

She was a very mysterious woman. At some point i would see her again and when i did I was going to follow her.

I wanted answers and i knew she had them.
I had decided that i was going to go home and get to bed.

I did want tomorrow to come quick so i could figure more things out about this riddle of mine.

This was like a puzzle and i was determined to find every piece to it, to get all the answers to know why this was happening.
I fell asleep fast, but it didn't last long. I woke up real fast.

I had this terrible taste in my mouth. I ran to the bathroom and got me a drink from the sink.

It didn't help, it just made it worse. I looked up in the mirror and saw......(End)
Alrighty so that is part 1 for you. I hope i made it interesting enough for you. I haad to change things up a bit so just let me know your thoughts on it. Your comments help me make my stories better, so please be honest. =D They can be harsh. I won't get mad. ahaha. Anyway i hope you enjoyed it and i'll be working on part 2 i just need help with something. So if you don't care to look at my blog and it will say the problem. =D thank you!

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#16xxheartlessxx12Mar 14, 2010

That was awesome beyond words!!! I loved it very much, wonder what role rachel will play in the story...hmm. I want more!!!

#17mogan44Mar 17, 2010

Great Job!  Looking forward to the next part!

#18Jennifer_RMar 18, 2010

This was very good! \:rah\: I really enjoyed it. You must continue to part 2. It was like he was having deja-vu. I'm sencing ground hog day. \:P Congrats on being feat'd too. \:\)

#19Nox Noctis DeaMar 18, 2010

Cool, it sounds interesting so far, can't wait for the rest! \:D

#20spitzmagicMar 19, 2010

OMG and saw what!!!!! cliff hanger..very interesting indeed..\:rah\:

#21annabel_leeMar 24, 2010

Very interesting!!! I want read more

#22anura32Apr 11, 2010

Nice story....

#23Nov 27, 2010

enjoyed

#24chloe_bubbMar 22, 2011

thats storey    has ben  a grate pleasre to see

#25TeenStyleGirlNov 1, 2012

Awesome! Amazing! Great! Waiting for the chapter 2! \:D

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