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The Drifter - Finale
Published May 18, 2010


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Jennifer_R

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Welcome to the finale of The Drifter.

Thanks to everyone who read, rated and commented on part 9.

Thank you to Cazarupt for his amazing lots, The Sealuxe & The Marlin. To Leomo for his beautiful lot, Modern Villa 3. Also to xxd3addo11yxx for her stunning Saint Ivan's Church. (Just to note that I did make a few changes to the furniture inside but this really is the perfect place for your sim's to get married.)
And one last thank you to the other wonderful artists for their cc, which helps to make our stories come to life too.

Welcome to the finale of The Drifter.

Thanks to everyone who read, rated and commented on part 9.

Thank you to Cazarupt for his amazing lots, The Sealuxe & The Marlin. To Leomo for his beautiful lot, Modern Villa 3. Also to xxd3addo11yxx for her stunning Saint Ivan's Church. (Just to note that I did make a few changes to the furniture inside but this really is the perfect place for your sim's to get married.)
And one last thank you to the other wonderful artists for their cc, which helps to make our stories come to life too.
Eliza couldn't believe how quick the next two weeks had gone. After organizing a rare day off at work, Susannah insisted that she help her in finding a wedding dress. After pounding the pavement for several hours, and not having any luck, they decide to grab a hot dog in the park for lunch. Walking into the last dress store in town, Eliza finds three more to try on. Tying her hair up briefly, she twirls around in the dressing room in the fifth dress she has tried on for the day.
Giving herself the once over in the mirror she looks at Susannah who claps her hands excitedly, both of them knowing that they have found the perfect gown.
Due to Wills athletic abilities he was able to start on as a Team Coach at Sunset Valley stadium. Going to work each day for the next two weeks had Will thinking, why he had not done this earlier.
His weekends of course were free and he spent every minute of them with Eliza. Will was really looking forward to their wedding day. Although he knew that it wouldn't really change anything in their relationship he still couldn't wait for Eliza to become his wife.
They had both talked about moving in with each other. Will wanted to hold off on making any commitments to who's house or where they would live as he had a surprise for Eliza after they were married. Hopefully she would like it.
Finally the big day had arrived. Will had already organized his tux the day after they'd decided on the date.
Sliding his arms through his jacket the silk on the inside feels smooth and cold. Adjusting his collar he stares at his reflection in the mirror.
"Dad, if your up there I hope you're watching today."
Will listens for a while but only hears silence. He really wished his father could be here, to share this day with him.
Undecided on how she wanted to wear her hair for the big day. Eliza twirls it up in a soft bun, held in by a diamond clip.
With one last application of lippy she grabs her makeup bag for any touch ups later and goes back into the bedroom to put on her shoes.
Sliding her white high heels on she starts to feel nervous as she thinks about how the ceremony will go.
Considering all the lectures Eliza had given at Two Peas Corporate Towers she shouldn't be nervous at all, but that was work and this is personal.
Upon fastening the last clip on her shoe she hears the side gate creak open.
As Charlie Evans walks around the corner he is speechless for a moment upon seeing his only daughter in her wedding gown. "Aggh...my baby girl" Charlie says with a big smile.
"Hey dad"
"You look so beautiful, honey"
Eliza rolls her eyes briefly and mutters a nervous, "Thanks."
"Have you got everything? I'd better not make you late to the alter!" he laughs.
Walking out to the car Eliza lifts up her dress to prevent it from dragging on the ground and Charlie collects a few of his daughters belongings. With the sun almost set, the sky becomes a pink haze which gives the stones on the old Saint Ivan's Church a purple tinge. Standing at the alter with his best man, Will feels his hands become clammy and he lightly brushes them on his pants.
"Dude, I can't believe you haven't introduced me to her yet" Connor says, playfully whacking Will on the arm.
"You'll meet her today" Will replies nervously.
Just then the doors open and he see's Eliza walk through with her father.
Eliza takes a couple of steps forward into the church and then stops. Charlie links his arm through his daughter's as he prepares to walk her down the isle. As the music begins to play they time their steps together perfectly.
Eliza gets brief glimpses of white and green as she walks down the aisle but all she can focus on his Wills smiling face as he waits for her at the alter.
"Dude, she is a stunner" Connor whispers to Will.
Will doesn't acknowledge his best man's words as he already knows how beautiful his wife-to-be is, instead he smiles widely as Eliza gets closer to where he is standing.
Approaching the end of the alter Charlie takes his daughters hand and places it into Will's, he then joins the other guests.
Will mouths a 'Wow' to Eliza. She smiles and says a quiet 'I missed you' to him.
It has only been one night apart but since they first set eyes on each other they have never left each others side.
As the ceremony begins guests remain silent but gather closely to hear their vows. After reciting her vows Eliza slides the ring, a symbol of her love and devotion, onto Will's finger. As Will slides the ring onto her finger, Eliza lets out a little gasp at the site of another beautiful sparkling diamond. Smiling at each other Will takes Eliza's hand and she places her hands onto his. They stare at each other for a moment, smiling.... ....and then the groom kisses his bride.
Guests applaud and cheer as they embrace in a passionate kiss, the final seal of their love and devotion to each other.
Walking down the aisle they are showered in rose petals thrown by their guests.
Hand in hand they walk into the dinning area ready to pop the bubbly and start the official celebrations. Chilled sparkling champagne is served and guests have a choice of Roast Turkey, Stu Surprise and Dim Sum to dine on. As bride and groom take to the dance floor, there's a slight clanging as guests put down their cutlery to watch them have their special dance. "Your look so beautiful" Will whispers into Eliza's ear.
She turns her head and gives him a single kiss.
"I was a nervous wreak this morning."
"Yeah, me too."
"So what's happening after the party? Dad mentioned to me that I would be going some place but he didn't mention where."
"Oh you'll see" Will says cheekily and spins Eliza out with one hand into the middle of the dance floor.
Pulling her back in they continue to dance, waltzing slowly from side to side.
After a few minutes the music changes to a more upbeat tempo and guests start to mingle and gather on the dance floor.


The party continues long into the night but Will and Eliza take off early to start their honeymoon. Driving up to his new yacht, The Marlin, Will pulls into one of the vacant parking spaces out the front.
Exiting the car Eliza can't believe her eyes. She looks to Will for confirmation that this is real.
"Is this...?" she stutters out.
"This is our transportation, to our honeymoon" Will says nonchalantly as he unloads their luggage.
Boarding The Marlin Eliza is still in shock.
"This boat is huge!" she says walking onto the main deck.
Will quickly carries the luggage inside and takes Eliza by the hand and leads her up to the front of the yacht.
They stare out at the ocean for a few minutes, listening to the waves and watching the stars above.
"Oh Will, this view is gorgeous."
"Do you think this will do then, to take us on our honeymoon?" he asks smiling.
Eliza throws herself at Will giving him a big hug.
"Of course it will do, it's amazing! But where are we going?"
"Do you really want to know?"
Eliza thinks for a second and then quickly answers. "Yes!"
Will pulls away from her slightly.
"Okay, if you really want to know then we are going to Champes Les Sims - for two weeks."
"France? Really?"
"It will take about 3 days by sea but I'm sure we can keep ourselves occupied" Will smiles suggestively.
Eliza cannot believe it, she has found the most sweetest and kindest man - who she is now married to - and he is taking her to France for their honeymoon.
Will stares deeply into her ocean blue eyes. "From the first moment I saw you I knew that you were the one I was supposed to spend the rest of my life with. I love you so much, Eliza."
"Oh Will, I love you too. What did I ever do to deserve someone like you?"
"Nothing, you have simply been yourself."
Unable to resist each other any longer they embrace in a passionate kiss under the starry night sky, and what were once two lonely hearts had now become one, filled with love and happiness.

The End.

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#22gabriellaevieMay 26, 2010

OMG! THIS IS A GREAT STORY! BEUTIFUL CHARACTERS AND THEIR HAIR! JUST FABULOUS! SICK AWESOME!!!\:D BRAVO BRAVO!!!!

#23uti504May 26, 2010

Great story =)\:wub\:

#24Midnight222May 28, 2010

A wonderful and beautiful wedding with all the ohhh's , ahhhh's and sniffles that go with the perfect day! I too am glad its left open! Hopefully the mystery of Will's dad will be resolved in an upcoming issue?? hint hint \;\) Thankyou for a wonderful story! \:rah\:

#25mogan44Jun 4, 2010

Aw!  What a nice ending!!!!! <3  Great story!

#26kamilka257Jun 8, 2010

oh, wow, now that I have seen it, I must say it's totally amazing! all the screens are so accurate and you did a great job making up the texts that are featured underneath them. I adore pic 27 - it's so romantic! Since it's the "Finale" I suppose there won't be any continuation of this story, but - will you be making some others? You're great at this so keep on! Best wishes!

#27RatRaceRobAug 17, 2010

Such a well-written series-- I loved being able to read this like three at a time-- very engaging and entertaining, and the screen shots throughout made the romance come alive!  I so hope to read more of your stories in the future!  \:D \:rah\:

#28xuxuka2Oct 26, 2010

Ameii o final muito romantica \:wub\:

#29socomvinNov 22, 2010

Such a great conclusion, im sad its over

#30maxi kingJan 7, 2011

\:wub\:what a wonderful story and ending!\:wub\:

#31Kayla_MarieJan 13, 2011

this story was awesome. i loved it

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