Adeline Two
Published Jun 17, 2010

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Welcome Back to chapter 2
Thank you all so much for reading and all the CC used.

If you missed the 1st chapter please read it before this one.

Welcome Back to chapter 2
Thank you all so much for reading and all the CC used.

If you missed the 1st chapter please read it before this one.

Father owned several financial companies around the world. He was well into the stock market. Money coming in... money going out.. and yet I never really knew exactly what he did. With Joesph gone there was no one to take over the business except of course Adeline. She spent a lot of time with him in his office. I guess he was teaching her the business. Sometimes after school I went to the park. I didn't mind being by myself. I didn't have to worry about what to say or how I was suppose to act. Making friends was not the easiest thing for me. I never understood what I was doing wrong. My Birthday is this Saturday. I would be, well...sorta catching up with my sister... a teenager, but somewhere, at some point, I can't really remember when it happened but something went wrong inside. With all the money pouring in to our bank account. I suppose I got lost in the greed and pride of it all. One thing led to another and then envy took control. It took root throughout my soul. Money is the root of all evil as I have been told over and over again. I never had to do anything..there were no chores for me to do. Mother did it all. I missed my brother. I could always count on him. He was the only one that was always there. Maybe if my brother had stayed. Things would've turned out differently. So I began to follow my sister around. Adeline was always busy with Madeleine and Gabriel. While I fumed with jealousy and envy, love and kindness slowly disappeared from my soul. Only one could save me from my own self-hatred of what I had become on this journey down into the black abyss. One day after school I heard them say they were going to the movies. I went too, but they were so wrapped up in each other that they didn't even know I was there. That's when I heard them talking about the Club house down by the beach. It was one place they could go without Father knowing about it.
I heard Gabriel say "Meet me at the Beach house Saturday evening."
I thought to myself....yes I sure will. I will meet all of you there....
Later that evening I crept into Mother and Father's room. Father was not there. Sometimes he would go to the towers where his office was....anyway I knew where they kept some cash. They kept it in the basket near the bed. I just needed a little bit. Enough to buy me a dress for my birthday. No one seemed to care about my birthday coming up so I didn't bother asking for the money. I just took it. I knew in the morning things would be different for me. At last my Birthday arrived. No one was home at the time. So the cake was all mine. I knew I wasn't as pretty as my sister or Madeleine, but not to worry about that. Time to go shopping for a new dress. I think a new hair style would be good too. Ahhhh.....much better. Now it's time to go on to the beach house. I saw them standing there. Heat began to rise from my feet to my head. Adeline had all the friends and the best looking boyfriend in town. At the time.. here.. when we were at the beach house I just could not understand what dad...oh excuse me....Father had against him. To me, he seemed nice enough. Was it Gabriel I wanted?

I set the turn of events in motion that would haunt me the rest of my days. Back then I didn't realize that my days were numbered also. I don't know for sure why I did what I did next. I couldn't help but wonder if that one single moment that I changed had a ripple effect on the lives of everyone around me. Like domino's all in a row, I watched them tumble one after another.

When I saw Gabe heading into the shack.
I hid behind the house so they couldn't see me nor hear me.

I called up Madeleine, for I knew she also liked Gabe. I had asked her to go talk to Gabe for me. I made up some stuff, anything so that she would go in the shack too.
And she did. Following Gabriel just like I knew she would.

Plan was in motion.
Next was to call Adeline. It couldn't have been more perfect. It worked like a charm. As she ran crying I almost felt bad for what I caused. But wasn't it for the best. That's what I told myself. So one way to make this better in my mind was to think that I actually did Adeline a favor.

Because what we all found out later was much worse then what I did here.

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#25libertyJun 20, 2010

Hey skattie great chapter\:wub\:
It made me even more curious.......

#26Jennifer_RJun 21, 2010

Oh my, this little girl, she is quite evil. Why would she set out to hurt her sister like that. Nice cliff hanger, now I'm really looking forward to the next part. Great job, Barb! \;\)

#27AlessiaJonasJun 22, 2010

\:o I Love It!! <3

#28IllandryaJun 23, 2010

nooooo, don't stop there! You are great at building the tension, Barb, a real "page" turner. I'm loving this story so far and so very curious as to what will happen - I have no idea what you have in store for us \:D

#29daphney1230Jul 19, 2010


#30FlatterSep 15, 2010

Oh my, what a mischief-maker Abigail is. How good part 3 is already out ... must read it immediately! \:\)

#31fabrizioammolloSep 19, 2010

I feel sorry for all the bitterness in Abigail that push her to do what she did! Great chapter!

#32muiseJan 1, 2011


#33HellsaintAug 11, 2011

Jeez! Screen 21 had so much emotion!! \:eek\: I felt as if Adeline was staring through the screen and into my eyes! GAH! The burning intensity... That must have been how hurt she felt \:\( And I so agree, that sometimes, making the "best" decision for someone else may not make it a right one. Excellent, excellent instalment \:D 

#34Sims2CrazeApr 5, 2012

"Don't do anything I would do!" lol :P

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