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The Night Prisoner Chapter3
Published Jul 29, 2010


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FINALLY!!!! Chapter 3! lol.

FINALLY!!!! Chapter 3! lol. As soon as we got home Magdalene screamed at me. "WHAT HAPPENED! WHY DIDN'T YOU TAKE HIM DOWN?!" I cringed.
"I...I.... I don't know..." I whispered. " I couldn't. I was weak...."
"Obviously." She hissed at me. "I GOT IT! You shall learn the ancient art of Kung-Fu!"
I moaned.
After tireless training I got my yellow belt. Magdalene insisted I use the board breaker.
" What are you doing? That's not the proper form!" Magdalene Sneered.
" Like you could do better!" I snapped. "Let's see what YOU know! It's a duel to the downfall!" I declared.
She snarled and leaped at me. We screeched and snarled well through the hours. In the end because of my training Maggie's (Magdalene) time expired. I blinked. Only one other vampire had ever defeated their turner. She was a legend. Now I was as well. Now who would guide me though being a vampire? My self, duh. A voice in my head said. I dragged my self over to my bed to sleep away the day. After arriving at the beach I sat down at a table to wait for prey. I real it in then go for it. Feed like there's no tomorrow. I was running through tactics when HE passed by. I got up and walked over. "Uh, hi."I said. "My name is Angelique, Angel for short." I smiled shyly.
"Ok, I'm Brian." He-Brian-said. "How can I help you?"
"Well, I just haven't seen your face around here before."(Which was 100% true)I said. "And I cloud use some company. And I thought you did to."
"Well, Angel. It's nice to meet you." He said, taking my hands. If I was living I would be blushing for sure. "You seem to need company too."
"Oh wow..." I sighed.
"You feel cold." He said leaning closer. I gasped remembering the best day of my life. Or at least it seemed that way.
It was my 19th birthday. I was throwing a ball at my house. My life was wonderful. I had meet the guy of my dreams. He was all mine. I hated my sister and she hated me. She always stole the guy. But not this time. I wouldn't let her. He said he loved me. The sad thing is I believed it. Brian took hold of my head, jolting me back to the future. I wrapped my arms around his waist.
"Angel, your beautiful...." Brian whispered. His breath smelled of mint.
He pulled me in for a kiss. My throat burned, but it lessened as I fell deeper into love. He pulled back, searching my face.
"Brian, Promise me, no matter what, you won't run away." I said quietly.
"Of course I won't." He whispered back.
"I'll see you tomorrow." I whispered, breaking away. With that I went home, drinking the blood Maggie had in a room from the hospital as a back up for me.
The next night I flipped out my phone.A strange object, used to contact other people in seconds. I like it.I dialed Brian's number.
"Hello?" Brian asked.
"Hi, it's me, Angel." I said.
" Oh hi! What can I do for you?"
"I was wondering if you could come over to my house?" I said quietly. "We need to talk."
"Ok, where do you live?"
"2653 Walsach view."
"I'll be there in a few." Brian replied steadily
It's not as long as I hoped but I didn't wanna write anymore! Expect the next chapter very soon! :D

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#1martoeleJul 29, 2010

Very good third chapter \:\) and waiting for the next one. Oh... congratulation on having the story featured! \:cool\: ~ Margo

#2fabrizioammolloJul 29, 2010

Nice screenshots!

#3alora1212Jul 30, 2010

Nice screenshot and I love the story! Happy about it being featured!

#4GelikaJul 31, 2010

Nice story. The screenshots from page 8 is great.

#5xxheartlessxx12Aug 1, 2010

I love this!!!!! Screenshot 8 is beautiful! Can't wait to read more! \:D

#6RatRaceRobAug 2, 2010

Another interesting chapter and excellent work on your flashback shot \:cool\:

#7kjw19Aug 5, 2010

love it can't wait for more

#8sokka841Aug 5, 2010

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#9silviamolnarrrAug 7, 2010

nice!

#10muiseDec 20, 2010

\:rah\:

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