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Published Jan 1, 2011


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Hello everyone! I’d like to thank everyone who’s reading my story and say thanks to al the CC creators! I’m from Romania and my English is not that good, so…onto the story.
They are Andrea (blonde) and Barbara, two sisters that just moved to Sunrise Valley. They are just starting their careers, and they want to rent a house. Andrea found something on the net so they are on their way to the house.

Hello everyone! I’d like to thank everyone who’s reading my story and say thanks to al the CC creators! I’m from Romania and my English is not that good, so…onto the story.
They are Andrea (blonde) and Barbara, two sisters that just moved to Sunrise Valley. They are just starting their careers, and they want to rent a house. Andrea found something on the net so they are on their way to the house.
This is the picture Andrea saw online…This house is incredible… - Look, Andrea, this is the house.
- And what a house, Barbie…And what a guy…he must be one of the owners…
- But you didn’t tell me the owner was a guy….
- You wouldn’t have accepted if I did so…there are two guys…let’s go meet him.
- But…fine…
- Hey, you must be the guy I talked to…
- Yeah, I’m Daniel. And you?
- I’m Andrea and this is my sister, Barbara.
- Nice to meet you, Barbara.
- Same here.
Barbara was definitely in love. He was perfect: his big brown eyes, his hair, his body, and that hot earring…
-Let’s show you the house, girls.
-Let’s go, handsome. I can’t wait to see it. Said Andrea.
Daniel showed them the entire house…but when they got to the living room, there was Christian, in his underwear…
- Hey, bro, and who are they? Nice girlfriends…
- They’re not my girlfriends, Chris. They are Andrea and Barbara, our new housemates. I told you about them.
- Right…Hey, I’m Christian. Sorry `bout my underwear…I’m hot anyway…so…
- Yeah, sure…said Daniel shaking his head…
The girls laughed about that discussion.
-Hey, I’m kind of tired. Could you please show me my room?
-Sure, let’s go upstairs. Follow me.
-This is it. What do you think? Do you like it?
-It’s….perfect. I LOVE it. Who furnished it?
-It’s….me…I like furnishing rooms, creating objects, clothes…and all of that.
-You are really talented.
-Thanks, but not really.
- Thank you so much! This is perfect! I love my room! Wooo!
She hugged him. She loved him so much…And he felt good too. She was special, she liked the things he did, none of the girlfriends he had, no one had told him before he was talented. Actually, no one knew he created things because he hadn’t got the courage. But she inspired him something…
Barbie changed into her pajamas thinking about Daniel…What a guy…She was never been in love before. But this time she knew he was the one.
After that, Daniel went out to swim and he found his best friend, Chris, there.
- Hey, bro. (Daniel)
- Hey.
- What do you think about the girls?
- I like the blonde one. She’s hot!
- Oh, you’ll never change. But me, I think Barbie is really cool! I like her, man.
- Take care, bro. If you play with fire, you may burn.
- I know….
And there was Andrea…
- Hey guys. Can I sit here?
- Sure, why not. (Chris)
- I’m going inside to make something to eat. Have fun!
- We’ll have (Chris)
But when he got into the kitchen, there was Barbie cooking.
- Hey, you read my mind.
- Right…I was kind of hungry so I came here to make some salad…Do you want to eat? I’m not that good at cooking, but you can try. I promise you won’t die…
- I’ll try. I would do anything you want…
- What?
- Nothing.
And they ate out. Barbara didn’t want to come so…they ate alone.
- My sister is the best…I love her salads.
- Me too. (Daniel)
- I propose a toast to today, the day I met these gorgeous girls. To Andrea and Barbara!
- To us!
- To…everybody!
- I’ll go see what is she doing.
He found her alone on the couch.
- Why don’t you come outside with us?
- I…just prefer to stay here.
- Oh, please, tell me. He sat next to her on the sofa, and grabbed her hand. And then he took her close and kissed her softly. Everything was perfect in that moment…but not for long… Meanwhile, Barbie went to clean the dirty dishes and she saw her sister and Christian talking.
- So, Andrea, how do you like our house?
- I like it a lot. It’s great…
- And the owners too…
- You look great too. I’m kind of stressed out so…I’d like to relax in the hot tub. What do you think?
- Let’s go, handsome.
They talked for hours until Christian decided to make the big step: he kissed her.
After that, they went to the bed, they couldn’t stop kissing and you know what happened next… Barbara and Daniel spent every moment together…They were in love.

When the night came, Barbara went outside. She loved to see the stars and the moon…It was so romantic. And she loved that peaceful atmosphere…no noise…She thanked God she met Daniel. He was the perfect guy for her, but there was something she didn’t know about him. Daniel was outside too…in the other side of the house. He never felt like this for a girl. But he felt really guilty…he couldn’t lie to her like that. He loved her. But she will hate him when she’ll know the truth.

Andrea slept peacefully next to Christian. She wasn’t waiting what was about to come…Thanks everyone for reading! Please comment. I’d love to know your opinion about my story.

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#1roberth131313Jan 1, 2011

Nice story that girl are so hot...........................do more part with story (love is in the air)

#2opel5Jan 1, 2011

Nice story

#3kweath2877Jan 2, 2011

greattt story! i love it! please continue!

#4urm0mJan 3, 2011

I wonder what the secret is \:\(

#5muiseJan 4, 2011

please, continue \:\)

#6isarpgistaJan 13, 2011

I also wander what the secret is. Your story is very nice! \:\)

#7orlovVIPMay 5, 2011

\:\)What's the secret?. . .I hope there's more!\:\) Let's go look. . .

#8tristen_love23Aug 26, 2011

whats the big secret? u better put more lol

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