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Looking for Love: Part 9
Published Mar 9, 2011


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Part 9, enjoy

Part 9, enjoy Lucy stood in the mirror and admired her wedding dress. Dominic and Lucy had agreed to get married soon and she was excited by wedding plans. She looked at her reflection and sighed as Barry filled her mind. He’d be happy for her, but it still broke Lucy’s heart to move on from him. If things were different, she’d probably be happily married to Barry with lots of children. But life never turned out the way you planned it. Tears filled Lucy’s eyes as she admired her reflection, she looked beautiful, that was true but she couldn’t help but have an unsure feeling inside her. She adored Dominic, but she wondered whether it was enough? He was the first guy she had loved since Barry but was he the right guy for her? Lucy’s thoughts were interrupted by a knock at the door, she had no time to undress and hoped it wasn’t Dominic. Instead she was relieved to see Sebastian. “Wow,” Sebastian said admiring Lucy, “You look beautiful.”

“Thank you,” Lucy blushed.

“I just came to say congratulations I guess,” Sebastian replied, “And to say I am sorry for being horrible to you before, I will always regret my actions.”
“It’s ok, you know we’re friends now,” Lucy smiled.

“I know, but I still feel bad,” Sebastian sighed, “I am trying to right all my wrongs after breaking up with Kate. I guess I never gave her the attention she deserved.”
“You broke up?” Lucy asked softly, “That is a shame. What happened?”

“We fell out of love,” Sebastian replied, “Her even more so.” Sebastian kept quiet, he knew Dominic had yet to tell Lucy the truth and he refused to break the news to her.

“Do you think you made the right decision?” Lucy asked.

“I think so,” Sebastian smiled.

“Well I am glad,” Lucy smiled, touching Sebastian’s arm reassuringly. She looked up as the sky started to turn dark, “But if you need me, let me know.”

Sebastian’s heart raced at her touch, “I will,” he replied.

He then reached and took Lucy’s hand in his, “Are you making the right decision?”

“Marrying Dominic?” Lucy asked shocked, “Well yes....of course I am.”

“Good,” Sebastian replied, “You deserve to be happy, more than anyone.”

“I do?” Lucy asked.

“Of course you do,” Sebastian replied, “You’d make a wonderful wife.”

Lucy blushed and Sebastian’s phone began to ring. He sighed deeply and made his apologies.
“I have to go,” Sebastian said speaking to Lucy as he answered the phone.

Before he left, Sebastian hung up the phone and kissed Lucy softly on the lips.

“Bye Lucy,” Sebastian said, “I will see you soon.” Lucy as so shocked she didn’t reply and watched as Sebastian rushed off.
The next day, Lucy was to meet Dominic at a prospect house viewing. Lucy arrived to see Dominic waiting for her,

“Hey,” Dominic smiled.

“Hi,” Lucy replied.
“Shall we have a look inside?” Dominic smiled.

“Sure,” Lucy replied.
Lucy followed Dominic inside the grounds and glanced at the house, it was beautiful. But she panicked. “What’s wrong?” Dominic asked worried.

“I just can’t,” Lucy replied, “I am sorry...”

“Can't what?” Dominic asked confused.

“Marry you, live with you...I am sorry,” Lucy replied.

“Why not, don’t you love me?” Dominic said annoyed.

“I do but not enough to marry you, I don’t think you’re the one for me,” Lucy replied, “I am sorry...”
“But I want to be with you,” Dominic replied, “I know that now.”

“I know, but it doesn’t feel right...” Lucy replied.

“Did you speak to my brother? Did he tell you about Kate and I?” Dominic asked.

“What about Kate?” Lucy asked confused, “Why would we speak about Kate?”

“It doesn’t matter...” Dominic replied.
“It’s better we end it now,” Lucy replied, “Before we got married. I am sorry.”

Dominic was shouting now and pointing at Lucy and she tried to calm him.
It took a few moments but Lucy mustered up the courage to walk away from Dominic and it was the easiest decision she had ever made. He wasn’t the one for her and she knew he would make the right woman happy. Lucy was free again.

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#6fredbrennyMar 10, 2011

That Dominic must be the dumbest man on earth... Good riddance... I hope he will move to the other side of the world. Now... if Lucy will hook up with Sebastian, I hope, for her sake, that Dominic is never going to be around anymore. I also hope that these genes will at least not be in Sebastian's way (and Lucy's) ... \;\)  Great update \:rah\:

#7fabrizioammolloMar 10, 2011

She made the right decision. And if Lucy will be with Sebastian, the four of them could meet again. That would be awkard.

#8astroparagnosteMar 11, 2011

she did the good thing just love your story \:rah\:

#9anura32Mar 11, 2011

I love the story. I hope she goes and marries Sebastian.

#10Mar 12, 2011

great story

#11MangioMar 12, 2011

Congrats on the feature \:rah\: Did her heart change for Sebastian? I wished he told her the truth.. can't wait for more \;\)

#12spitzmagicMar 12, 2011

on my ...congrat on this wonderfu feature....good for Lucy, you go girl...I loved it...\:wub\:

#13tusiaczeeekMar 14, 2011

ohh im waiting for more!!! \:D

#14MoonlightAoAOMar 15, 2011

MORRREEEEEEEEE!!!! *0*
ಠ_ಠ  i mean it, do it NOWWW D:<

#15CrazyfireAug 2, 2011

HE DIDN'T HAVE GROUND TO STAND ON FOR  HER TO SAY NO!THE NERVE!!

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