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REVENGE: Part 1
Published Apr 19, 2011


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Welcome to REVENGE: Part 1

I hope you enjoy it :) +

Welcome to REVENGE: Part 1

I hope you enjoy it :) +
The girl with the red hair is Nicole Harding... A straight A student. A geek you may say, a fashion victim, ginger pigtails and glasses makes Nicole a geek. Its typical how the world works. Shallow and judgemental.

The bleached blonde girl is Rachel Stevents and her two side kicks Hilary Kent (back) and Tina Winters. These three girls seem to delight in making Nicole's life hell. They are all looked on as the Mean Girls of campus.
Nicole burst into tears.. she never usually cries infront of the mean girls.
"Aww poor baby! Have you just realised your dressed in a carpet" Rachel spat.
"Just leave me alone Rachel..." Nicole cried.
"No I wont... I never will you ginger bastard. I hate you, and I wish you was DEAD!" Rachel spat with emphasis on the word dead.
"Because of you, I am stuck in this hell hole of a dormitory when I should be in the top sorority household!" Rachel shouted...

Its the truth, well kind of. Rachel was seen tripping Nicole up infront of a professor, and the professor had Rachel removed from the sorority, stopped her grants and moved her into a dormitory, unfortunately into the same one as Nicole. Rachel has hated Nicole ever since because she believes Nicole destroyed her life...
Nicole just ran away without saying anything, up the stairs... with Nicole laughing with her friends "GINGER MINGER!" They all yelled in fits of laughter... "Why me!" Nicole thought to herself.. All she wanted was to have an easy time studying, and possibly make some new friends. Was that too much to ask? Instead she was being bullied. "Do you not think we should just lay off her now Rachel.." Hilary asked, not expecting an angry outburst..
"SHUT UP HILARY! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW THAT BASTARD HAS MESSED WITH MY FUTURE! I WAS DOING SO WELL AND THEN SHE TURNS UP AND SMASHES MY LIFE TO PIECES.. I LOST MY BOYFRIEND, MY FRIENDS, EVERYTHING! SHE'S GONNA PAY!" Rachel screamed almost... Hilary just stared with her mouth wide open...
"Well you have us as friends... aren't we enough?" Tina asked...
"...well..yeah ofcourse you are!" Rachel lied.. she longed for her old life where she was popular and looked on as royalty.
Just as Nicole sat down to start her latest assignment, Rhianna Parker started talking to her... Rhianna Parker is the hot girl of campus, the girl that no one messes with.
"Hey, Im Rhianna.. You alright Nicole?" Rhianna asked. Nicole stopped... "she knows my name" Nicole smiled to herself...
"Im good thanks, are you?"
"Yeah Im not bad... Take away the glasses and the baggy clothes.. you'll be stunning you know." Rhianna smiled, and then walked away.
Rhianna studies fashion and is a model so that compliment meant a great deal to Nicole... Her confidence is at rock bottom, and she feels fat and disgusting.. "I wish I looked like you, and had your confidence" Nicole thought to herself and then got on with her assignment. "Hey... What was you talking to that fat ginger for? You do know she's a lesbian" Rachel told Rhianna...
"... You what? Wait.. Who are you?" Rhianna asked almost laughing.
"Im Rachel Stevens.. you know.."
"No, I don't know. That fat ginger over there happens to be a nice girl. You however... well your just a fake, bleached.. moron. Urgh. Now move." Rhianna said, cringing at this mean girl.
Rachel froze and felt embarrassed... "I must get my revenge on Nicole.." Rachel thought to herself. Nicole was still winning even though she wasn't even meaning to.. or trying to. "Who the hell is that blonde girl.. She just asked me why I was talking to Nicole, that quiet girl." Rhianna asked her brother James.
"Oh, thats Rachel, she got thrown out of the sorority because of Nicole, she was seen tripping Nicole up infront of a senior professor, and he had her thrown out of sorority." James replied...
"Ahh.. that will explain why she's saying mean things about her.. poor Nicole, she's a really sweet girl.. I'll be keeping an eye on this Rachel Stevens." Rhianna replied. Nicole finished her finance assignment and sighed to herself... "Why am I even studying this.. I wanna be an actress, I wanna be me.." Nicole thought to herself, she felt sad that she wasn't really being herself, but Rachel Stevens was making it impossible for her. Rhianna saw Nicole heading towards the common room and waved at her... But Nicole saw Rachel and decided it would be best to avoid the common room... she smiled at Rhianna and then walked the opposite way. Rhianna noticed Nicole alone eating her dinner.. She didn't know why but she felt sorry for her, she decided to sit with her... "Nicole, this is my brother James.." Rhianna smiled.
"Oh hello James, Im Nicole.. Its really nice to meet you.. For you both to be hear talking to me." Nicole replied.
"Its really nice to meet you too Nicole.. Sooo what do you study.."
"Finance.. I hate it, I dunno what Im doing.." Nicole sighed.
"Never be afraid to be yourself Nicole... Its the only way. You do what makes you happy, take a chance and don't just follow the easy path of life" Rhianna smiled, Nicole felt truly inspired by Rhianna. She was right. So right, it was exactly how she was feeling. Before they knew it, the three had been speaking for three hours. Nicole had made two new friends, she felt so happy.
Rachel Stevens looked on... she couldn't believe what she was seeing. Nicole hugging the most well liked, cool girl on campus... this can't be right. Nicole was really getting to Rachel now.. she really had to destroy her. And then it hit her... Rachel told Hilary and Tina her plan to bring Nicole down but the two didn't get it...
"You think that Nicole is a nice girl and doesn't deserve to be destroyed..." Rachel said, anger boiling up inside her..
"I..I.. I just don't know why you hate her so much. Move on Rachel, your obsessed with making her life hell.." Tina replied. Hilary shrugged her shoulders, not saying anything, not wanting to upset Rachel.
"Your my bestfriend, are you gonna help me?"
"... Okay fine, we'll both help!"
Rachel stood up and smiled to herself... "I'll wreck her life, like she did mine"

End Of Part 1

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#2CloudwalkerNZApr 20, 2011

Interesting start\:D

#3urm0mApr 20, 2011

Rachel = mental!

#4CleotopiaApr 20, 2011

LOL Rachel needs some proffesional help! \:D I think ginger hair is pretty, and nicole is the onliest one who doesn't use too much eyeliner! all of the girls wear too much \:D \:D

#5cat29523Apr 20, 2011

GREAT STORY \:\) I think there should be a part 2! I was wondering, where can I get the Rihanna hair? It's rather cute!

#6DokkicaApr 21, 2011

Nichole is so pretty \:D and Rachel is needs some professional help XDD \:rah\:

#7mysteryjack1Apr 22, 2011

Great story! Looking forward to part 2! \:\)

#8sherribabi24Apr 23, 2011

Oooh..I like this story, I can't wait for Chapter 2!!!

#9enigmaheartApr 24, 2011

Rachel is so mental! GREAT STORY, I LOVE IT \:D 

#101322Apr 27, 2011

I like that story \:D  But I don't like Rachel.She is very....Just i don't like her.

#11SakeLillyXOXSep 22, 2011

ooooooh >.< People like Rachael really tick me off. They're just bleh. Great first part! I really love this story. And I love Nicole's character. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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