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Did you know? Part 2
Published May 30, 2011


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demonangel26

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Thanks to all the readers, comments and featured CC!!

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By the time you read this, i'll be long gone.

Thanks to all the readers, comments and featured CC!!

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By the time you read this, i'll be long gone.
I'll be seeing the world from a different view.

Away from you, and away from this dream, a dream i never wish to wake from.
But it's not real... is it?

I dunno what hurts more... Leaving you... Or knowing this reality from the very start.
I'm not good for you.

I'm not the only woman.

No...

I'm the other woman.
You called me beautiful... But without the colors that painted my face, im left with just my self.


An image of a broken woman.
Im.. Ugly...

But you're the most beautiful thing I've ever seen. And you left me such a wonderful gift.


Wasn't that enough?





Wasn't that fairytale enough?
What is enough anyway?

I think you know better than i do.
Don't look for us. We wont look for you. That's a promise...

-To be continued

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#2urm0mMay 30, 2011

So sad!

#3AyuMay 31, 2011

ohhh!what a sad story...\:eek\:

#4ashchivz1May 31, 2011

i cant wait for the next 1! It's quite sad \:\(
 

#5Semi3333May 31, 2011

I read part 1 and no 2 this story will be sab i can't waith for next part \:puke\:

#6fabrizioammolloMay 31, 2011

Very interesting! \:rah\:

#7marko232Jun 1, 2011

\:rolleyes:

#8MangioJun 3, 2011

I love how you narrated this story \:wub\: I wonder what misunderstandings occurred.. Congrats on the feature \:rah\: Can't wait for more \;\)

#9oldmember_tsmiph76Jun 4, 2011

You've got my attention! I am ready for more! \:wub\:

#10FikcijaJun 15, 2011

Oh it's so sad... And as much as it is tempting to go and read MORE (and I'm happy I only found it now when there actually is MORE), I love the way how you split the story and tell it from different points of view.

#11Lovethesims34Nov 1, 2012

this a beautiful story!

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