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Trail of Broken Hearts
Published Oct 10, 2011


Written By

LaNellyxD

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this is the first story i have ever posted, and i'm a little nervous, my spelling isn't so good,not to mention i tried to make it sound kind of southern when you read lol. hope you enjoy though.

this is the first story i have ever posted, and i'm a little nervous, my spelling isn't so good,not to mention i tried to make it sound kind of southern when you read lol. hope you enjoy though. Ah come from a family of 4 annoying brothers, named, Luke, Lucis, Jacob, and Henry and a loving father and mother named David and Shelly. We don't have much,just this land of mah grandfather and each other.
every morning daddy wakes up the boys, gets a cup of coffee and starts the day before the rooster can even let out a crow
Daddy and mah two older brothers are farmers, they grow what they can to sell, and for the family to have food on the dinner table while momma takes care of our livestock, collecting the eggs of the hens, milking the cows and feeding the pigs. as for me and mah two younger brothers,we stay out of the way. reading our books and going fishing,
ah have been working alittle bit on mah baking skills though. daddy build me a small kitchen just like mommas
we were so happy, it was like our own little slice of heaven...

until...
Daddy became ill...and nevah got any better...

Daddy passed away that night..
leaving his 5 children and his wife behind, what made it worse was that momma was with child Henry the oldest silbling knew from that momment on, he had to work TREE TIMES as hard as before, to support this family...and keeping us from falling apart...

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#6isarpgistaOct 10, 2011

Awesome start! Can't wait to read more! \:\)

#7Dita_MOct 11, 2011

I am curious about the continuing.

#8fredbrennyOct 12, 2011

What a lovely start! \:wub\:  I am going to read part two now! Really good for a first story and I love your screens and the details you put in them \:\)

#9martoeleOct 12, 2011

Very good start. Very sad now and I'm anxious to see how it will continue. \:\) Good screenies! \:rah\:

#10fabrizioammolloOct 12, 2011

Great set up!

#11ShokkyOct 15, 2011

It starts very interesting!

#12-kalisa-Oct 15, 2011

Oh no, poor family \:\( I loved the screenshots!

#13damnanoirOct 16, 2011

I love the screenie and teh story too!

#14RaeBow Oct 16, 2011

I read it in a southern accent \:\) and it was really good, i loved it!

#15EnthroxOct 31, 2011

The fifth screenshot is fantastic! The lightning is great!

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