ENOE - Ep 11 - FINALE!
Published Nov 10, 2012

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It's been bumpy and sometimes not as good as I would have liked it. But now I know how to tackle my next story.

Please enjoy the last episode :)

It's been bumpy and sometimes not as good as I would have liked it. But now I know how to tackle my next story.

Please enjoy the last episode :)
Enoe : Dad! Doctor Waters raised his head as he heard a gentle womans voice outside his cell.

His eyes slit open to see a beautiful woman standing staring at him. Was he dreaming?
As he continued to stare, some fimilarities arose.

He stood up slowly from his chair as he continued to stare at the woman. Her eyes looked glossed over with tears.

Did he know her?
As she smiled at him, Doctor Waters mouth opened with shock. It was her. The reason he had come to this damn city. He turned away from the woman to look at the ceiling.

Doctor Waters : "I'm not a religious man. I'm a man of science but I cannot lie. I have been praying every day that I would get myself out of this pit I have driven myself into.

You have answered me, whoever is up there.

You have brought me back ..."
Doctor Waters : "You have brought me back... my daughter." and with the realisation that his daughter had returned as this beautiful woman, Doctor broke down into tears.

Tears of joy, pain, gain and loss.

Enoe stared at him, her eyes also filling with tears. She was so happy he recognised her.
As Enoe wiped her eyes, she turned to Warren who was trying as hard as he could to not let a single tear drop from his deep green eyes.

Enoe : Let's get him out of here Warren. I want to go home...
Mr Rowland : I don't think so. Warren and Enoe spun around to greet Mr Rowlands standing firmly at the other side of the room.

Mr Rowland : I'm surprised Warren. This is not how you usually deal with clients. Falling in love with the captee. How desgusting. You should be ashamed.

Warrens face blushed as he realised that Enoe was staring at him. Did she hear properly?

Warren : Just stop. You've lost, she's here with me.
Mr Rowlands : Don't push me boy. Mr Rowlands : You've forgotten once thing. Rita did her end of the job. Enoe is activated and she's ours.

Mr Rowlands clicked a few buttons on his cellphone.
And with the click of the button. Enoe eyes turned dead as her body lifted up from the ground.

Warren : "NO! You don't know her power! Don't do this! You'll hurt her!"

Enoes body began to glow as she lifted up her dress floating against her limp body. THe room started to turn bright.
Doctor Waters : "NO! That's full power. You'll kill us all!" Mr Rowlands : "Haha. This is very true Doctor. You were not aware this was our plan from the start?

Only from the rubble can we truly evolve.

I bid you goodbye."
And with Mr Rowlands exit; Enoe continued to rise. Her body crashed through the ceilings until her body was daintily floating above the city. The bright white light growing with her.

Warren had grabbed onto her ankles his face plastered with worry. But her body slipped from his grasp.
Warren angrily kicked and kicked and punched until blood drew from his fists as he helped Doctor Waters out of his cell.

Doctor Waters : "We need to get to the top of this building. We need to save her."

Warren nodded as he bolted up the fire escape until he reached the top.
Doctor Waters stood behind as he saw his daughters soul being torn apart in the air. The light was getting bigger. He knew that if they didn't stop it the whole city would perish. Warren stared at the tiny speck in the sky. He did love her. He thought she was the most beautiful person he had ever met. She was the only person on the planet that could melt his heart and he was going to lose that.

He was going to lose the heart skips, the sweats. The feeling he got when he thought about kissing her lips. The touch of her soft ivory skin. The knot he got in his stomach when he stared into her soft grey eyes and felt like everything was going to be ok.

He couldn't hold it in any longer. His eyes exploded with painful tears, he clentched his fists as he thought about losing the only person in this world he truly loved.


He fell to his knees as he wept.
Doctor Waters : She's moving into the final stage Warren! You need to go get her! She's floating above the sky scraper!!

Before the Doctor could finish his sentence, Warren had ran back down the fire escape and was running towards to the city.
Warren climbed to the top of the Skyscraper and went outside.

He clinged to the rocks as he pushed himself up towards the top most point. He needed Enoe. He needed her.
He climbed to the top, his muscles aching from the labour. His hair dripping with sweat, his hands reaching as far as they could to try and grab Enoe.

She lifted her hand out as to grab his. But she was too far away. He couldn't possibly get any closer.

Warren : "Enoe, please. You are not just a weapon. You're a beautiful, smart girl. Please, try to fight it..."
And as Warren confessed his love for her. The light dissapeared and Warrens heart nearly stopped as he watched his beloved fall to the concrete below. His eyes widened and time seemed to slow down to a blur.

He fell down the side of the building until he reached a landing.

Warren : Please don't die...please're all I have.

Warren climbed through the first window of the skyscraper and got to the bottom as quickly as he could.
He ran, crying at the thought of what he might see when he reached the bottom.

A crowd had gathered and as he squeezed through he saw her. Floating about a metre off the ground. She looked peaceful.
Warren edged closer, scared to touch her. He held her head and pulled her back to the ground. Her heart wasn't beating and she wasn't breathing.

And yet she still looked perfect.
Doctor Waters edged through the crowd to see a defeated and broken Warren.

Warren looked up to the Doctor.

Warren : She's not breathing...

Doctor Waters : I don't know how far she got into the final stage.

Warren : I can't live without her...

Doctor Waters : Let's take her home.
Warren : And here I am. Sitting in her room. The room she grew up in. Sitting in the chair she used to sit in.

When we brought her home, the house was dusty. It had an eerie feel to it. It felt cold.
Warren : The Doctor de-activated her. He said she won't die like a regular person. So if he can have time to reprogramme her, we might be able to save her. But first the wounds that she experience inside will need to heal.

I sit here every night, hoping that she will open her eyes.
Warren : I told the Doctor everything. About Mr Reynolds scheme, my role - Ritas role.

And yet he accepted me in his family.
Doctor Waters : You are welcome to stay here. I don't care what you did. All i care about is that you saved her and she is here with me. Warren : The days turned into weeks and I found myself dying a little inside each day. Doctor Waters was feeling the same - I could see the life leaving his eyes. Warren walked up to Enoes room where she lay as she always had.

Warren : Enoe, I'm losing here. If you don't come back, I don't know what i'll do. You're so beautiful and I am sorry I ruined a large part of your life. But you saved me from a ruined part of my life. That's gotta mean something?

There was a long silence.

Warren : Please wake up...

Warren tried a similar speach every night, and as always he didn't get a response. So he swiveled round and went to leave.
There was a splutter from behind him and he froze on the stop. He heard the shuffling of the bed linen.

Enoe : Warren...
Warrens heart froze. He wanted to scream but he couldn't. He couldn't even move. He stared at her as she shuffled to the edge of the bed and then up to her feet. Enoe : I heard you. I heard everything you said.

Enoe stared at him. Like she had lived a thousand lives.

Enoe : I love ...
But before Enoe could even finish declaring her love, Warren moved quickly and pushed her dainty body against the wall with his muscular arms. Wraping her tightly with his body.

He pushed his firm lips against hers, trembling as he did so.

Her body fit perfectly on his.

Enoe couldn't of resisted and she wraped her arms around his neck as she returned his kisses, the tears flowing down both of their cheeks.
Warren : After Enoe awoke. My life completely changed. I had never felt so alive. I had never felt so much love and been given the same amount back. Doctor Waters was finally reunited with his daughter.
Warren : And I was reunited with my one and only love. The girl that captured my heart.

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#3TeenStyleGirlNov 11, 2012

Amazing. Truly amazing.

#4demonangel26Nov 11, 2012

Only just started reading all of this a week ago, didnt feel right to comment when i was so far behind, but man, its tge end.. aww, pretty good story, reminds me of kyle xy haha, which i love.

Looking forward to your next story! GOOD JOB XD

#5genywenyNov 11, 2012

Sweet ending! Loved it!\:wub\:

#6fruitopiaVIPNov 11, 2012

Tears of happiness, sweet story.

#7enid30Nov 12, 2012


#8Simsiming20Nov 12, 2012

how to pose your sims like that ?? on page 38 o.O ??

#9ZafaraNov 13, 2012

@Simsiming20 I use a mod called Pose Player \:\) You can chose poses for your sims so it looks a little more interesting \:D x

#10jadababy2003VIPNov 25, 2012

This was a really cool story I hope you continue to write. Great job!s

#11windmountainDec 15, 2012

Aaw so sweet \:\) Awesome story

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