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Meet the Vicentte's
Published Nov 14, 2012


Written By

ozzyh

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Hi everyone, first of all I would like to thank those in advance who took time reading my very first submission. 'Meet the Vicenttes' got a comic type layout, if you like this style please do let me know. I hope you all enjoy it :)

Vicentte are a family of Vampires who moved to Bridgeport before it had high rise buildings and night clubs. They lived in solitude for many decades, but as population grew thick the Bridgeport most powerful family started surfacing. Being regarded as the oldest, richest and the most influential families, Vicenttes were bound to end up in the spot light.

Hi everyone, first of all I would like to thank those in advance who took time reading my very first submission. 'Meet the Vicenttes' got a comic type layout, if you like this style please do let me know. I hope you all enjoy it :)

Vicentte are a family of Vampires who moved to Bridgeport before it had high rise buildings and night clubs. They lived in solitude for many decades, but as population grew thick the Bridgeport most powerful family started surfacing. Being regarded as the oldest, richest and the most influential families, Vicenttes were bound to end up in the spot light.
Meet Caroline Vicentte, oldest and the hottest Vampire in the city. She is like a glue which keeps this family together.

She got this aura which make people around her really comfortable, one feel secure when she is around. Farewell of this family means everything to Caroline.
Dario Vicentte, son of Caronline Vicentte. Regarded as one of the most powerful and richest personalities in Bridgeport.

Dario is one of the most mysterious characters. People who are acquainted with him will describe him as unorthodox. No one can tell what really goes on in that gigantic brain of his.

Being the richest person in town can make you some what of a playboy but his lifestyle is anything but glamorous. Dario runs his own company which does RnD in Bio Genetics (yes! he use to be a nerd), and he rather find genetics study more interesting instead of burning moves on a dance floor.
The beautiful of them all. Liara Vicentte daughter of Mr. Hecket Raven and wife of Dario Vicentte. She is one of the most gorgeous looking gal in town (every vampire story need one..right!).

Her five star celebrity status makes her one of the most influential vamp in Bridgeport.

Most critics will describe her as a spoiled child but people around her call her generous and caring.
Elvira Vicentte, daughter of Caroline Vicentte can be best described with a quote "like mother like daughter".

She is one of the most caring member of this family, and would do anything to protect her own. Her friendly and down to earth attitude makes her loved by all. She also finance many charity events.

But she can not hide or run from her Vampiric nature though.
Unlike most vampires of her age, Enna Vicentte daughter of Elvira Vicentte is something special.

Witty, smart and highly intelligent are the traits which sets her apart from many other children of her age group. She is regarded as a prodigy. Not only that she is one of a kind among her species.

Her father was human, which makes her the only human/vampire hybrid known. As a result her brain development is a lot faster than normal vampires and she is also immune to the sun, making her the only day walker in Bridgeport.

And its not the humans who call her the "Cursed Child" its the vampire community.
The 'Golden Voice', Victoria Vicentte sister of Caronline Vicentte was once known as the best singing sensations of Bridgeport.

With her amazing voice she captivated her audience, an inspiring character for many of the city folks.

She had an amazing ability which made her unique among Vampires. Where other Vampires had to stare in their victim eyes in order to sedate them Victoria had the ability to do that with her voice.

But the tragedy struck Vicentte family, when Victoria was found dead in a car accident. Initial reports were foggy and now her ghost some times roam family property maybe looking for some answers.
The ever so good looking Edan Vicentte, son of Dario and Liara Vicentte.

Edan is an average teenage kid who is really into sports. His friends describe him as a team player who will always look after your back and a really friendly guy, also very famous among 'Ladies'.
Meet Mr.Grumpy, not your typical household pet. Mr.Grumpy is Ennas best friend but he can be a bit hostile toward others.

Rumor is that he once ate neighborhood cat. Cat was last seen poking around Mr.Grumpys aquarium.
A vampiric vigor takes hold of Edan as he faces his old enemy (in games that is). Edan could smell the sweet smell of victory...but! A defeat is a hard one for some one like Edan to swallow especially if the opponent is a girl...and a child. Meanwhile, in the study room Caroline, Elvira and Dario were locked in some sort of heated conversation. As Caroline spoke in loud voice, every one else went silence. Meanwhile! Victoria Vicentte had received a summoning call and decides to answer it. Call came from the living world. As Victoria spoke in her ghostly voice, Enna replied with no sign of fear or discomfort as it seemed quite clear that they got acquainted long time ago. A look into some past events as Victoria continues with her story. As Caroline looked up to see a familiar face walking through the gates. Confusion suddenly turned into surprise with a whole lot of joy. Victor Vicentte held his wife after a long time, Caroline couldn't stop the tears of joy. Before Caroline could soak the whole moment in, Victor started talking about his expedition. Confused and disarrayed by sudden change of mode, Caroline jumped to few...unusual conclusions. A moment of happiness suddenly turned into moment of concern. As Victor started speaking. Their is was fear, and anxiety in Victors voice. Victor spoke of his expedition, without indulging into details. Leaving Caroline in a maze of complex questions. As Victor leave through the front gate while assuring Caroline in a very mellow voice that he will be back in few minutes. Caroline who hardly had any time to contemplate the whole situation thought that his husband was just going out to meet with his old friends. Victoria closes an obscure story filled with riddles for young Enna. Meanwhile, in theater room. That evening Caroline spoke with Elvira about there earlier argument with Dario. In the meantime! Liara overheard some of the talk earlier that day between Dario, Elvira and his mother and decides to put forth her concerns. Their was some agitation and concern in Liaras voice. There were no certain emotions as Dario speak. Liara was in little shock after listening to Dario. Please do provide me with your feedback, based on the feedback I shall upload the next chapter. I hope you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading :)

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#1puffpinataNov 14, 2012

Good start but the speech bubbles are sort of confuseing maybe you could just take them out and judt write in the normal spot. Oh well good job though! I really liked how you set up all of their names!\;\)

#2lish300Nov 15, 2012

I really like the descriptions and the story could be really good but I don't like the speech bubbles

#3dhylaciouzNov 15, 2012

i really enjoying your story, love it!!

#4demonangel26Nov 15, 2012

Haha, i like this, talk bubbles dont.bother me.at all, infact i like it, maybe you dont even need to use the textbox description at all and just put.it.all in the.picture to lessen, the.. uhm, confusion. Whatever *shrug*

Anyway, good start, cant wait for the next one \:\)

#5Bby-LNov 15, 2012

lol..page 42..twilight..
a lil help.. ctrl+c and type > headlineeffects off \:D
keep writting! \:wub\:

#6applecakesNov 15, 2012

Hi I happen to like the comic layout of your story, as for the story it was good it had drama and we all know a story needs drama to keep the reader hooked I look forward to more\:D

#7jesgranny111Nov 15, 2012

very boarderlandsie. The layout is really cool! Good work.

#8ozzyhNov 16, 2012

Thank you everyone for your comments. I will try to make the improvements recommended. I personally like the caption bubbles so I will try to improve on that and make them a little less confusing. Thank you again truly appreciate the feedback \:\)

P.S: Intro was some what inspired from the B2 \;\)

#9chloe_bubbNov 24, 2012

loved it it was amazing \:\)so looking forward to next one:P\:D\:\)

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