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Newbie (First Chapter)
Published Apr 3, 2013


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Hey, this is my new story 'Newbie'.
Its about a teenage girl who is put into boarding school. She is forced to share her room with a complete stranger and is given a teacher she cant stand! Will this newbie ever fit in?...

Hey, this is my new story 'Newbie'.
Its about a teenage girl who is put into boarding school. She is forced to share her room with a complete stranger and is given a teacher she cant stand! Will this newbie ever fit in?...
So, here I am... 'Victoria Heights'. I'm actually pretty nervous! Everything has gone so fast: My parents death, My move in with Auntie Brenda, and now this...
I never wanted to go to boarding school, its torture, well that's what people say!
I KNEW IT!!! I never should have agreed to this.
My new teacher (Mrs Hedges) is so strict! She told me off for getting something wrong (you have to admit, that is quite harsh). I wanna go home...

I've been sitting on a park bench for ages, its pretty neat, I might make it my new 'hang out'. I'm totally alone; no friends and no teachers I'm willing to talk too...
I just found out that I have a roommate. I'm not sure how I feel about it. Shes nice, funny and her name is Isabelle.
We didn't really talk much, it was pretty awkward.
She actually looked surprised when she walked into her room to find me wondering around!
I'm already home sick!!!
I couldn't get to sleep and Isabelle's snoring wasn't really helping! I feel like I'm never gonna make friends or enjoy any lessons, but I'm determined not to make that true!
Its 5am now and I'm still struggling to get to sleep. I miss my own home, my own bed, my own toilet, my own parents!
I'm really happy!! (and might be in love)
A cute boy came and hung out with me on the swing set. His name is Max and hes one of the popular kids! He is really funny and he said we could have lunch together sometime...
I actually think things are turning around for me... apart from the fact I got attacked by squirrels on my way back.

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#1nachtskommtkatzeApr 4, 2013

Your protagonist is very cute. :3

#2xJ3rianApr 5, 2013

In my opinion, I think your story is way too quick, in 6 pages you made like 2 chapters >.

#3AliceLoveYaApr 12, 2013

Its kinda quick

#4ErickaMatibagApr 17, 2013

I had the hair the shirt and the shorts that wearing by the girl
Sorry for english

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