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Autumn with You - 10
Published May 10, 2013


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priscillamit

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Sun..
I found someone who will watch every sunrise with me until The Sunset of Our Life
and he is all kinds of beautiful as you End my Day

Sun..
I found someone who will watch every sunrise with me until The Sunset of Our Life
and he is all kinds of beautiful as you End my Day
Now we're gathering together in the morning.
getting ready to go home .

Sally : okay, so we're all gather here, we should be cleaning this place , and pack things up

Len : there's no need for that sally

Sally : what?? why??
Rick : Actually , this place will be cleaned by danny's workers. so we just leave it like that.

Len : Anyway, i'll drive sally home . how about you guys?

Rick : i know what do you mean! haha.. i'll ride ken's car

Ken : Hah?????
Rick : how about you danny ?

Danny : of course i'm with ken!

Sally : wait a minute.. why you guys not coming with me and len ?

Danny : if both of us join in... you know what i mean ?

Len : Crazy!

Ken : HOLD ON!!!
Ken : You guys just make a decision without asking me first?? what the hell? its my car in i'm the one who will drive it, besides there's only 1 sit and there's no room for both of you , where the heck will you sit? if only sally with me . that will simply fit in!

Danny : What just now? sally? . no way sally will ride your car, sally will definitely ride len's car!

Rick : agree . don't worry ! we can just sit at the back right? you just made things more difficult.
Sally : umm.. so who's car will i ride then?

Len : its me . there's no way i will allow you to ride snake's car.

Ken : how dare you call me snake!

Len : whatever. its time to get going.. see you tomorrow guys! lets go sall

Sally : alright ! bye bye guys!

so we both get inside the car.

Ken : ARGH!!! i'm sick with both of you

Danny : If we both join with them . its like we are ruining their romantic moments

Rick : that's what i'm thinking too

Ken : bla bla bla blaaa!!
So we both are inside the car, i'm more than shy. it's like we're on a date! oh.. i really wanted to have a date with len, it's my wish for a long time.

Len : Baby..

Sally : Ba... bab.. babyy??

Len : whats wrong ? we're dating now right?

Sally : well .. you're right

Len : call me baby please?

Sally : ba.. bab.. yy.. baby?

Len : hmmm.. you need more practice
baby.. hahaa , anyway, its okay if i bring you to my house? there's nothing i'm gonna do.. really , i'm just gonna change my clothes.

Sally : i don't mind, lets go

Len : well , that was the fastest decision.
*brrumm*

Len : so sall , what is your first impression about ken?

Sally : well , he's kind, friendly , funny, sometimes rude and good at teasing, but he's not bad to be my new friend

Len : okay , this is what i'm telling you. don't get too close with that guy

Sally : Why??? he's a good guy.

Len : You'll never know what he is up to, when he first met you his eyes can't get off from you, i don't know what is he planning but i'm sure its something bad. just keep your distance with him , i know that guy for a long time.. and he's really great at attracting girls. it is why i'm really worried about you . don't forget about this.

Sally : Understood , i keep that in my mind
Len : We almost arrived .

Sally : Oh , so where's your house?

Len : Actually its not a house . it's an apartment .

Sally : ohh . so that high building there is your apartment?

Len : ah hah . why don't you look left ?

Sally : ohhh myyy! its so wonderful!! i believe the water sources is came from the waterfalls from top of the hills, and the currents flows to the sea . its so amazing

Len : it does
So we both finally arrived at Len's apartment, i just can't believe how rich he was, because this is the only apartment and the highest building in this town.

Len : let's go sally .
We took the lift and get up to len's room.

Len : *yawn*

Sally : sleepy ?

Len : not really
Sally : well , i don't see anyone here except you

Len : yep , i lived alone

Sally : oh , so you don't have any relatives or?

Len : nah , i have 1 sisters

Sally : Where is she?

Len : she's taking care of my father , in bridgeport, but i'm sick of staying with them , so i just moved in this town, besides i don't even want to talked about them , even called their name , i'm just wanna throw up . First i'm gonna change my clothes you can sit there.
Sally : here? okay , comfortable enough.

Len : Make yourself at home, this is my house and your house now . if you need anything just take it, if you feel hungry there's food in the refrigerator , or you just feel lonely .. just come to my room.

Sally : oo.. okaay , thank you . there's no need for than len.

Len : well it's up to you, wait for me here okay?

len goes to his room and change his outfits
Len was living alone in this luxury house, looks like he's not depending on his family, he moved by himself .. where does he get those money to buy this apartment?
it's right .. he's a rich guy so there's no need to worry about money, but i can see from his eyes.. he does hate his family i wonder if his family hates him just like the way he did . it's like we both had a same family problems too .

"The view here is so lovely there's even a rainbow "
I just take a view around, while waiting for len to come out

*stand up and walk around the living room*
White Lily?? haha , loves flower huh ? i loves that flower too.
So we both had a lot of similarities

Next is the kitchen
There's food inside the fridge huh? i don't need food, a glass of water is enough .

"Sally"

i turn around
Sally : That was the fastest changing i ever seen

Len : Ever seen a guy changes his clothes for about an hour ? i'm not a women sall. haha , besides i felt bad leaving you alone here

Sally : It's okay , at least i'm not escaping right??

Len : true , so..
" How does it looks? weird? it does suite me? if not i'm gonna change it to another one"

......
Ummm.. Ummmmm... hmmm..

"It does suite you, Cool, good looking , perfectly handsome . everything you wear will suite you"

"Umm .. hahaha i tried to find some clothes that will match with you , but i think i have none, so i just wear this, there's a lil bit similar. anyway , wanna have a talk down there?"

"Where?"

"just follow me"
Sally : ohhh this was the place , nice enough

Len : Well sally , what do you say about my apartment?

Sally : ummm.. Too fancy .. but i love it, its because the view from up there is great, i even can see rainbow there, the sea, the trees , hills.. so lovely .

Len : Perfect , just like me . that's why i'm staying there. i love the view
Sally : So what are we going to do next?

Len : Date?

Sally : a..aa date???

Len : yeah, i'm asking you to a date

i'm so excited that we will have a date!!

Sally : yes .. yes!

Len : Great .. wanna go to the park?
Sally : yes! That's what i was hoping for!

Len : You sure loves park huh sally?

Sally : that's part of my life.

Len : so do i . let's get going
Lonely road side, as usual there's no signs of life yet . Finally both of us reach the first sight park Len : So sally , you really love nature do you?

Sally : I love love love nature. i can spend my entirely life with the nature . but i think now nature change its position , it's 2nd to me now

Len : Then who's 1st?

Sally : I'm not going to tell you

Len : Oh .. so you're not going to tell me?
Sally : Ah! look! sunset!

I stood up from the bench and stand beside the fence to see the sunset.

Len : What the? hey.. who's your first?
Sally : Come here len .. the sunset is coming, i love to watch the sunset at this side i even sang a song while i'm waiting the sunset . how about you??

Len : .....
Suddenly my back felt heavy, as if someone were leaning on my back , and it was Len .

Sally : L .. le.. len??

Len : tell me who's your first? are you cheating on me?

Sally : what?? of course not! ahh.. you're so heavy len!

Len : turn around
Len : Tell me ? who's your first ..

Sally : it.. it.. it is yyouu!!

Len : me? are you sure??

Sally : Y..yyou don't trust me?

I was trembling to talk , i'm so shy.. it is because he is to handsome? or it's because of my love for him ? argh my heart beat so fast.
Len : I trust you if you KISS me

Sally : K.. Ki..Kissss??!!

Len : Yes, what?? you don't want to kiss me??

Sally : I ii.. i wanted to kiss you. but why on this place?

Len : i don't care , so was that day we kissed on the beach right? so we can kiss here too right? ahh.. i think you disgust me? or now you hate me?

I'm getting dizzy .. i don' have any words to tell next.. then i lift my hand to his hips, and pull him . then We kissed
He kissed me passionately but i wasn't thinking that he really kiss me, its like he was whispering in my mouth , his truly feelings can express it all. Just before the sun fades
with the twinkling of the night
he hold me, cherish this kiss at sunset
at the end of the day,
I realize that you're all i really wanted to be with Forever till Eternity
Till Then! thanks for reading guys :wub:

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#9ErcMay 11, 2013

i just love all your stories!! such a beautiful creation \:wub\:\:wub\:

#10tadahpoohMay 11, 2013

aamazing I loved it \:wub\:

#11HappyLizcat98May 11, 2013

\:rah\: i loved! \:wub\:

#12ValBostonMay 12, 2013

Aww this is sweet \:\)

#13byt30May 16, 2013

Aduh liat Ken jadi inget tokoh Byakuya Kuchiki di Bleach XD rambutnya itu lho hahaha keren keren, tapi masih keren si Len XD~

#14yu16May 18, 2013

i love the first page caption so sweet!

#15fruitopiaVIPMay 22, 2013

You have some very lovely screenshots.

#16RoxxaneMay 27, 2013

Sweetness !!!! Beautiful sunset cherish the kiss \:wub\:

#17megumiRikazukieAug 16, 2013

Hee~ >. .< *bursting the tears of happiness* hahaha. \:wub\:

#18megumiRikazukieAug 16, 2013

this is already my third time reading this! You're such an awesome and the awesomest writer! Love you and all your stories! ^-^ \;\)

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