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Live while we young - chapter 1
Published Aug 7, 2013


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polinasid

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Hey guys (:
It's my first Sims 3 story, and you can leave a replay about what you think, even about the bad parts(maybe it will help me to improve my next stories), but please don't be rude.

P.S:
I'm steel ESL(English Second Language)student, so if you notice any spelling errors, feel free to comment about where I need to tweak it, and on which page.(but there shouldn't be too many)
if you'll do it, it will really help me.

Thanks, and Enjoy ;)

Hey guys (:
It's my first Sims 3 story, and you can leave a replay about what you think, even about the bad parts(maybe it will help me to improve my next stories), but please don't be rude.

P.S:
I'm steel ESL(English Second Language)student, so if you notice any spelling errors, feel free to comment about where I need to tweak it, and on which page.(but there shouldn't be too many)
if you'll do it, it will really help me.

Thanks, and Enjoy ;)
I woke up to a loud noise coming from next to my bed.it was my alarm clock which meant now it's 7 AM,time to get ready for school.
When I opened my eyes,I was able to see a grey,weak light coming trough my widow,it was raining outside.
I looked at the big,fat water drops going down from the sky, and it was kind of dark outside, which meant today will be gloomy, just as I feel.
I finally was able to get out of the bad and push the bottom to turn the alarm clock off.
Then,I went towards my wardrobe and I wore the first few things that I saw.
Afterwards, I went to the bathroom, brushed my teeth and did something with my hair.
When I finally headed downstairs, it stopped raining.Then I entered the kitchen and saw my mother.she was ready to go to work, and was sitting against the table, almost finished her breakfast.my father already went to work earlier that morning.I harried up and made my self a cereal, and then sat in front of my mom.
when I started to eat,she started to talk:

-"Good morning honey"

-"Hey mom" I answered with a quite voice.

-"what's wrong?Why are you so quite?" her voice was a bit worried.

-"Oh, It's just that I hate school"

-"Ah, okay. but remember this is your last year there, and you got only few month till it's over" she winked while she was smiling.

-"I guess you are right.."


Then,she stood up,washed her plate,kissed me on my forehead and ran to work.
I guess I should start to walk too.
It didn't took me too long to get to school.
when I walked trough the big,white doors,and came to the end of the hallway, I saw my best friend Cindy standing near my locker, VERY exited.
-"Hey Alex" she first started to talk.
-"Hey Cindy" I answered to her while we were Hugging.
-"You will never guess!!" she almost shouted.
-"what?"
-"do you know this cute guy from the other class, that his name is Chris?
-"Yeah,what about him?"
-"I heard from someone that he has a crash on you!!!"
-"okay.."
-"OKAY??!!, are you serious?"
-"Yep"
-"But why?"
-"how would you know the thing you heard isn't a lie?and then, what should I Do about that?"
-"Well, believe me, I saw the way he is looking at you, and I really think you guys should talk."
"okay, maybe another time, now I need to get my things."

I opened my locker and got my books. A second later,the bell ringed.
-"we should go now" I said to Cindy and we headed to our class.
When it's finally was recess,me and Cindy went to my my locker.but when we came there,
Chris came there to see me.
-"hey girls" he said with a cute smile on his face.
-"OH MY GOSH, look it's him!!!" Cindy shouted towards me and both me and Chris looked at her awkwardly.
-"I think I should go now.." Cindy said while she was walking towards the school yard.
-"Hey Alex, I was wondering If you want to go to hang out after school?" he asked me, a bit nervous.

-"Oh sorry, but I don't really want to. maybe another time, okay?"

-"Oh,okay" he said to me with a disappointed voice and walked away.

After he disappeared from my eyes, I headed to the school yard to find Cindy.
I found Cindy sitting on the swing at the end of the school yard, so I headed towards her.when I sat on the swing next to her, she started to talk:
-"so, What happen?"
-"he asked me out."
-"and what did you said?"
-"I said no..."
-"YOU SAID WHAT??!! but why?"
-"It's just because the school ends soon and I don't want to be with a broken heart
while everyone else will get married..."
-"Who cares about the future? listen to me Alex, you've got to live while you're young!! in a few years you will look sadly at the moment when you said no, and will be willing to reverse the time to change your future.

Now I was thinking very heard.
"should I go and find him to say yes? or maybe I shouldn't? oh, I really don't know..."
sorry, but the story wont continue

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#1bmg128Aug 7, 2013

Oh boy. You're an English student? You've got a lot to learn. You've gotten such a low rating from MANY grammar/spelling mistakes, from other jealous higher, more popular, writers. The house is odd, and so is your choice of clothing. Most people on here are older than teenagers, and would not like to read about them. And, I'm pretty sure, no teenager would just walk over being told some guy likes her, rumor or not. However, this is not much better material than some of the stories on here, who get 5.0 ratings. Don't fall down from this. Maybe try looking at some other stories on this site, and learning from them. I'm not saying all of this because I wanna be mean. Why would I do that? I feel pity for you. 1.0? Dang. I'm sorry if this hurt you. DON'T GIVE UP, OKAY? Keep trying. Fall. Keep trying. Fall. What do you do? Say it out loud, now. "Keep trying". You'll get there. I promise. \:\)

#2polinasidAug 7, 2013

thanks \:\)

#3Hailey BemoAug 7, 2013

Just check your grammar and spelling, other than that, this is great! \:D

#4emmyawesome22Aug 11, 2013

On page 7 it should be crush not crash, but other wise I found your story really good. I'll be looking forward for chapter 2 \:\)

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