Back
Hello Love! - CH 11 -
Published Aug 16, 2013


Written By

Bby-L

Storyteller
19555Views4.5Rating

Page 1 / 50

Hi ^^
This is the 11th chapter..
Happy reading! >.<

Hi ^^
This is the 11th chapter..
Happy reading! >.<
As soon as we arrived at Maya's Villa..
She dragged me to her room and ask me to change my clothes with her swimsuit.
Celo : M-maya..are you sure about this?

Maya : Of course! It suits you better.
Celo : But..

Maya : Trust me. You looks great!

Celo : I know, but..I have no confidence..
Maya : Oh come on..

Celo : I know, I know..Thanks for borrowing me your swimsuit.

Maya : Don't thanks me for that.
She chuckled.
After changing into swimsuit, we went downstairs.. Ren : Hmm..You look cute. It suits you. Maya : See, you have to be more confident.

Celo : T-thanks,

Maya : Haru, what do you think?
Haru : I think you looks more attractive to me.

Maya : W-what did you say..you make me embarrassed.

Haru : I said the truth.
He chuckled.
Celo : ...
Before, he asked me to be his girlfriend. And now he's flirting with another girl in front me.
He's such a jerk.
Suddenly Ren's phone went off.
Ren : Yes? I see. I'll call you back after I check.
He hung up then press several number to make another call.
Ren : Maya, can I borrow your computer?

Maya : Sure, Follow me.

Ren : Thanks.
He followed after Maya.
Ren : I'm sorry, I have work to do.
He said to me.

Celo : It's OK.

Ren : I'll be right back.
He said before he left.
Ren : Dean, can you send me the report of..
His voice slowly disappear.
Right after they went inside.. Haru : Looks like you'll give him a second change.

Celo : W-what makes you say that?
I said as I puzzled.
Haru : It's irritating me to see you two flirt each other.

Celo : I'm not flirting with him.

Haru : You looks like that to me. Your blushing face when he said you were cute. It's more irritating.
Celo : I said I'm not flirting with him. And I'm not blushing because of that!

Haru : Then tell me why?

Celo : T-that's..
I can't say I was embarrassed because he saw me in a swimsuit.
Celo : ... B-besides, You're the one who was flirting with Maya.

Haru : What's your concern?
Celo : T-then, I'll say the same.

Haru : ...
Maya : He said we can go on without him. He said sorry.
She disappointed.
Maya : He looks so busy.

Haru : Let's go.

Maya : Wait, Haru..
Haru : What are you feel sad about?

Maya : I just..feel bad. Because I was the one who ask him to go with us.

Haru : Please don't be. He's here because his girlfriend is here.

Maya : But, still..

Haru : Let's go.

Celo : ...
Seriously, what's wrong with him?!
... Maya : Haru..wait for me..

I sighed.
They really enjoyed their time.
I feel like I was a big mosquitoes here.
Maya : Hey, Haru..What happened with Celo?

Haru : Why did you ask me?

Maya : I don't know who else to ask but you.

Haru : Why don't you ask her directly?
Maya : I thought that was your fault.
She splashed the water to Haru.

Haru : Why me?

Maya : Because of what you've said before.
She continuously splashing water to him.

Haru : Don't blame me, can you?

Maya : Ah, you're useless. I'll go to ask her better.
Maya : Celo..Are you OK?

Celo : Yes?

Maya : Why are you not join us here?

Celo : Uhm, I think I'll just sit here a bit. I feel relaxed here.

Maya : Okay, just join us if you want.

Celo : Thanks.

Maya : And, don't over thinking about what Haru said. I knew he wasn't serious.

Celo : I-I never think about that.

Maya : Okay, I'll go swimming a bit, then.

Celo : OK.
I don't know how long I sat here staring into the ocean. Haru : Are you planning to just sit here without trying to join us?

Celo : H-Haru..Please don't mind me, just go have some fun.
Haru : Are you mad at me because of what I've said earlier?

Celo : Why should I?
I paused.
Celo : And, beside you've said the truth. Comparing myself to her..
Haru : Silly.
He paused.
Haru : If you're not attractive, I wouldn't be attracted to you.

Celo : ...
Then why you said like that.
And, flirting with her.
Celo : ...
Wait.. what am I upset about?
Maya : Celo, why are you so glum today? Are not you having fun?

Celo : No, no..I..Of course I AM having fun.

Maya : Really? But, I don't feel like you do having fun.
I stood up.
Celo : I..I'm just..Hungry..

Maya : ...Ah! Right! You haven't eat lunch, right?

Celo : Y-yeah.

Maya : Let's go back. It's almost time for dinner as well.
around 7pm..
Ren prepared dinner for us as his apology.
Celo : Are you sure you can do this?

Ren : I'm really sure.
he chuckled.
Ren : But, I still need you to supervise me.

I chuckled.
Maya let out a big sighed.

Haru : What's wrong?

Maya : First, Ren. Then Celo. And now..You..

Haru : What?

Maya : I feel bad for today. You all didn't have some fun.
Haru : Who said? Look at them. Don't they look sooo have fun over there?
He said as he smirked.

Maya : I know, But you..

Haru : Don't worry. I'm just tired.
Haru : Better I'll go to my room.

Maya : Eh? How about your dinner?

Haru : I'll pass.
He said as he walking inside the house
Maya sighed.

Celo : Is there something wrong, Maya?
I concerned.

Maya : I don't know, what's wrong with me today. I feel all of you didn't have fun.

Celo : All of us?

Maya : Yes. Include Haru.

Celo : ...
Haru?
Celo : Uhm, actually..I think he doesn't feeling well. He had a fever last night. and I don't think his fever already gone even he said it's gone.
Maya : I'll go to check him.

Celo : O-OK. I'll let you know when dinner is ready.

Maya : Thank you.

I don't know, but I feel a bit disappointed. I want to go check if Haru is Ok. But..
Not long.. Ren : Done!

Celo : It looks like delicious.

Ren : Better you go to call them to dinner.

Celo : Right!
I go straight to Haru's room.

Maya : I know. Don't worry about that.
She said as she closed the door. But she fell silent a moment.
Celo : Maya?

Maya : Celo?

Celo : Why.are you crying?

Maya : Crying? Ah, no, this just..There's something on my eyes..I'll go check it now.
She said as she took her left.

Celo : Ah, the dinner.

Maya : Please, go on without me.
She said before she left.
What happened to her?
Did he made her cry?
But, why?
That night..
I ate my dinner with Ren.
Haru and Maya were on their room.
After dinner,
I try to knock Maya's room door, but no answer.
Then I try to knock Haru's room..
Celo : Haru..Are you still awake?

"Come in."
Celo : Uhm..I bring your dinner..

Haru : I'm not going to eat his food.

Celo : Why are you acting like that?

Haru : I said, I don't want to eat that.

Celo : Fine, fine.. I'll cook something for you.
I said as I about to go.
Celo : Can I ask something?

Haru : What is it?

Celo : I..saw Maya crying. Did you say something that hurt her?

Haru : ...

Celo : I-I'm sorry.
I said as I turned.
Haru : I just answer her question.

Celo : Question?

Haru : First, she asked me, what is she to me.
He paused.
Haru : I answered. A friend.

Celo : ...

Haru : Then, when she was about to leave, she asked me..What are you to me?
He paused.
Haru : I don't know how to answer her. You're not my lover. And I don't know about your feeling.

Celo : ..Then..what you've said?
I said carefully.

Haru : I like you.
He paused.
Haru : And I want to ask the same question. What am I to you?

Celo : ...
I gulped.
Wh..why..My heart..

He rose from his seat and I heard he took his step towards me.
Haru : I just want to make sure..
I accidentally dropped the Tofu Dog that I carry when He drew me close to him.
Haru : If you like me, or not..
He said before he kissed me gently on my lips.

I don't know, I can't resist his kiss..
I just stood still.
I closed my eyes and feel his soft lips on mine.
I-I want him.
He slowly pull his lips from mine.
Haru : Your closed eyes already answered my question.

Celo : ...
*To be continued :D

Other Stories

Add a Comment

Please report any offensive comments so we can remove them. Use of bad language, unsuitable links or flaming may result in deletion of your account.

Add Smilie
Please log in to post comments

19 Comment(s) so far


Load more Comments New Comments are displayed at the bottom.

#10GaBssLoverAug 17, 2013

\:wub\:

#11SmoothMarbleAug 18, 2013

Wooooo! The Kiss! \:D Love It!!! Can't wait for more \:wub\:

#12mariacoraAug 18, 2013

I love this story so much and I think this the most beautiful chapter .. congratulation \:rah\:

#13ChibiSims246Aug 18, 2013

it's worth the wait
luv this chapter \:wub\:

#14yu16Aug 18, 2013

wahhhhhh!!!!!! they kissed!!! Passionately!!!!

#15AsalyhilssAug 18, 2013

Ahhhh I just love these series! \:rah\:

#16BrooklyniloveutooAug 18, 2013

EEKKKKKK WHEN I SEEN THIS I SCREAMED INTO MY PILLOW

#17Dannx3Aug 19, 2013

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! *O* awesomeee

#18Linna700Aug 20, 2013

Best. Story. Ever. !! I Love It!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

#19harrylovesbriAug 25, 2013

gahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 \:wub\:

Ad-blocker plugin detected

We have detected that you are using an Ad-blocker plugin. This means our main source of income to cover bandwidth costs is blocked when you are using our free service. We would ask that you whitelist us and allow ads to show.

Anyone using an Ad-blocker plugin will be forced to wait 180 seconds instead of 10 on the "please wait" page.


VIP Membership

For as little as $4.00 per month you can become a VIP member. This lets you use our service free of all ads and unlocks access to our popular Download Basket and Quick Download features.

Become a VIP member now
Proceed to download

Log in to TSR



Sign in with Facebook

Not a Member yet?

Click here to Register now

Download blocked

Please turn off your ad-blocker to download.
If ads are a problem you can become a VIP member and enjoy an ad-free site.



Getting this message with no ad-blocker active?
Go here for help.
Please wait - loading...