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Hotel Of Secrets Chapter 1
Published Sep 4, 2013


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This is my first story and I hope that you enjoy it.

This is my first story and I hope that you enjoy it. The young woman followed the endless road into the heart of the desert. She was lost and had no idea where she was going. Her car had broken down and she had no where to go. There was not a single house in sight nor another car. She was stranded in the middle of no where. The girl made her way to the bottom of what seemed like an endless hill. Her face had turned a shade of red and she was quickly becoming dehydrated, but something caught her attention. She turned her face and saw something that seemed to be a house. There was a building in the distance. She immediately began to walk towards it. As she got closer she noticed a sign. The sign clearly said, "HOTEL." The girl couldn't believe it. Was she dreaming? Was she hallucinating? It all seemed too good to be true. She made her way to the front door but was interrupted by a strange girl.
"Hello, is your hotel open. My name is Samantha and I am looking to stay a few nights."

Strange Girl- "Yes it is just go inside and the owner will assist you."

Samantha- "Thank you."
The girl walked into the room and waited patiently at the front counter. An elderly lady appeared.

Lady- "Hello there my name is Grace and I own this Hotel. Are you after a room."

The young girl simply nodded her head.

Samantha- "Yes actually I am. How much for a few nights."

Samantha placed her money on the table and the old woman looked at it. Within a few seconds they money was gone.

Lady- "That should be enough make yourself at home."
Samantha's POV

The room that the old lady gave me must have been the oldest room in the whole house. Everything about this Hotel was old, but I had been walking for several hours so I didn't care. I collapsed on the floor. My head was aching so much that I couldn't think straight. I was drifting slowly off to sleep when suddenly a knock awoke me.
I walked outside an saw a young man standing casually. His blonde hair almost looked white in the daylight and his blue eyes were very glassy.

Samantha- "Hello may I help you."

Guy- "My name is Jake and I live here with my mother and younger brother I was just checking to see if you wanted any towels or food for tonight."

Samantha- "Yes that would be amazing."

I laughed after saying each sentence, because he was quite attractive and the way he looked into my eyes made me feel different.
I was about to go inside when he grabbed my shoulder and turned me around.

Jake- "This place is different and if I was you I would leave very soon."

He walked off into the distance. I stared at him thinking of what he meant.

Thanks for reading hope you enjoyed it. I will try to get another chapter out by next week.

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#1NisukiSep 4, 2013

OH, I can feel the shivers going through my spine, when he said that.. Great start, I'm curious about the next chapters! \:wub\:

#2mariacoraSep 4, 2013

*___* this is really scared !! awesome start , I encourage you to keep writing ! \:rah\:

#3CheeseYEAHSimsSep 5, 2013

I LOVE THIS!

#4MarijaJSep 5, 2013

Beautiful, I absolutely love it. \:D It's mysterious and exciting. My first thought on what he said was "ghosts", but who knows what is it? \:D Waiting for the new chapter, make it quick! \:wub\:

#5AlessaFayeSep 5, 2013

Interesting start! Looking forward to the next one! \:D

#6martoeleSep 17, 2013

That sound interesting enough to follow the next chapters as well. Nice idea! \:cool\:

#7deluxepinkfairyVIPSep 18, 2013

It looks just like Bates Motel but in the desert! Great start to the story by the way!

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