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Hotel Of Secrets Chapter 2
Published Sep 7, 2013


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This is the second Chapter. I have a really good idea on what is going to happen but first some talking scenes and other things must happen first. Please enjoy!!

This is the second Chapter. I have a really good idea on what is going to happen but first some talking scenes and other things must happen first. Please enjoy!! Samantha's POV

I went back inside and sat down on a small couch. I turned the television on but there was no reception. I leaned forward and placed one of my hands on my head. There was something about this place that made me feel something strange. I began to think about what Jake had said to me early that day. Why did he want me to leave? Suddenly the lights flickered on and off.
I decided to take a bath. Maybe a nice warm bath would calm me down. I turned the tap and only cold water came out. I was desperate for a bath so I bit my cheek and slowly sat down. The cold water froze my body, but after a while I got used to it. I was drifting off to sleep when I heard my door slam. I quickly dried myself and got dressed. I cautiously went outside and saw three towels and a platter of fresh food. Someone had brought the food in while I was bathing. But who was it? My first thought was Jake. I walked outside and went to reception but, it was shut. I heard a noise coming from the side of the building so I went to investigate. I saw Jake throwing something in the garbage.

Samantha- "What are you doing?"

Jake- "Nothing that a little girl like you needs to know."

Samantha- "Excuse me!"

He looked me in the eyes then continued doing his work. He shut the bin and walked off, but he stopped walking once he reached the second set of stairs.

Jake- "The nights not a safe place for a girl like you."

Samantha- "What do you mean? You just keep on warning me about stuff."

He didn't reply instead he just kept walking.

I went back to my room and laid down on my bed. There was one window that would not shut causing, the room to become very cold. I lay on the bed thinking of Jake and what he was warning me about but, nothing came to my mind. I left the lamp on incase anyone entered while I was sleeping. I let my eyes close. I woke up to the sound of screaming and pouring rain. A loud scream which sounded like the name Will was coming from the room next door. I sat up and realized the light I had left on was off. The power started flickering as the screams got louder. I stood up and walked up to the door. I cautiously walked over to the door. The screaming got louder and louder and the name Will could be heard easily. I raised my hand up to the door. I was about to knock when I heard something behind me. A hand was placed on my stomach and face. The person had a strong grip on me.

Jake- "Quiet it's me Jake."

I tried to scream but his hand stopped the sound from escaping my mouth.
He pulled me to the side of the building.

Jake- "Be very quiet."

Man- "That is very strange I thought I someone."

A man walked out of the room. He was dressed casually and he looked very smart, but I had a quick look inside the building and saw a machine. I instantly lost all my strength and went weak,

Jake- "Its okay he is gone."
Jake took me back into my room. He sat on the desk and pulled me close to him.

Jake- "I am so sorry for scaring you like that, I only wanted to protect you from him"

His eyes began to tear up.

"What's wrong?"

Jake- "Your not the only person who has came here and thought this place was weird. In fact I came here with a girl who I loved and she looked just like you...."

Thanks for reading tune in for chapter 3, the chapter where strange things start happening.

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#1smileface101Sep 8, 2013

Very interesting I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter \:D

#2blossom4Sep 8, 2013

There is a page where it has the same photo. Sorry about that I must of clicked the wrong picture but anyways, there was supposed to be a picture of a man. \:rah\: \:ph34r\:

#3Jazzy2Sep 8, 2013

Okay\:puke\:

#4MarijaJSep 8, 2013

So great! \:D I can't wait for the next chapter! This is my fave story so far. \:wub\:
btw, you can edit the story and put the right picture, 'cause I really want to see the man. \:D

#5NisukiSep 8, 2013

Owha, love it! I can't wait to see more. Oh man oh man, oh man!! I wonder who that man is (or what!) Aw Jake :[

#6martoeleSep 17, 2013

The mystery grows! \:cool\:

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