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ZAYURY'S CINDERELLA pt3-The End
Published Aug 31, 2007


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Zayury

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As always my gratitude to all the wonderful custom content creators! Thank-you for sharing your magnificent talent with us! Special thanks to the following creators for the skintones and eyes used in this story:

Enayla, Serasims, Jason Ulloa, and louis of Simcribbing!

As always my gratitude to all the wonderful custom content creators! Thank-you for sharing your magnificent talent with us! Special thanks to the following creators for the skintones and eyes used in this story:

Enayla, Serasims, Jason Ulloa, and louis of Simcribbing!
Welcome back ladies and gentlemen! Thank-you very much for all your sweet comments and for returning to read the last part of this story! I am fully prepared to deal with whatever our dear 'sweet' Cinderella has install for us today! Now let us begin!

After the mean stepmother and wicked stepsisters left, Cinderella waited till it got dark...
then she ran out of the house yelling!

FAIRY GODMOTHER! FAIRY GODMOTHER! WHERE ARE YOU?!!
Cinderella! My dear, why are you running around yelling like a banshee? Well! There you are! It's about time! I'm going to the prince's ball and I need a gown right NOW, fairy godmother!! So, hurry up I don't have all night!! I see. Since you asked so 'nicely' I'll be happy to assist you with one!

The fairy godmother waved her wand towards Cinderella...
and a blue mist began to cover Cinderella!

I'm warning you, this better be good godmother!
When the blue mist cleared Cinderella was dressed in a beautiful soft pink gown, and she had a new hairstyle!

VOILA' my dear! You are breathtaking!
ARE YOU INSANE! I LOOK LIKE I SHOULD BE ON TOP OF A SWEET 16 CAKE!! WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY HAIR?!! DID SHIRLEY TEMPLE PUKE ON MY HAIR?!! YOU MUST BE OUT OF YOUR GOODY-TO-SHOES MIND IF YOU THINK I'M GOING TO WEAR THIS PIECE OF S...

Cinderella!
Zdon't get upset withz your godmother...hiccup!

I think all...you...it looks good...hiccup!

OH RIGHT! I'M GOING TO GET FASHION TIPS FROM MY "PURITAN' NARRATOR, I DON'T THINK SO!!
GIVE ME THAT WAND!! I'll DO MY OWN DRESS!!

Cinderella, you are hurting me!
I was only trying to help you, Cinderella! Please be careful with that wand! I know how to use this! COME ON WAND! SHOW ME WHAT YOU GOT!! Oooh! My hand vlooks pretty goodz! hiccup! OH! WOW!! I LOOK GOOD!! Uh...I zthink you forgot the whip? hiccup! Ha ha ha! Ha ha ha!! VERY FUNNY! Ha! FINE, I'll change! COME ON WAND! ONE MORE TIME!!

Cinderella waved the wand over herself and a blue mist covered her again!
I'm afraid to look...hiccup! TA DA!! OH YEAH BABY! THIS IS IT! WHO'S YOUR MAMA?!! Oh Yeah! Zthat's more zdiscreeet! Ha ha ha!! hiccup! HA HA HA HA!!! Oh, my stomach hurts! Ha ha ha!! I DON'T CARE! Laugh all you want! I AM WEARING THIS AND THAT'S FINAL!!! Vwhatever...no back off my skin! hiccup! Remember Cinderella you have until midnight! The ball was in full swing when Cinderella arrived!

HELLO EVERYBODY! YOUR GODDESS IS HERE!!
Oh man, how embarrassing...I zdon't know her...hiccup! Prince! I'm so glad to finally meet you! I'm sure you've been wanting to meet me, I'm Cinderella!

Aumph! Yes, thank-you! Nice to meet you too Cinderella...(where's the rest of her dress?)
So, prince! Your place or mine?! mmmm

Ahem! Ahem! Ah...
Oh yeah! Zthat's playing hard zto get! ha ha ha! hiccup! Oh! Prince I love dancing slow songs!

Agggh! Cinderella, there is no music! Please...I can't breath...
The prince managed to escape Cinderella and went to dance with Anastacia! (Thank-you animcfly for giving me the names of the wicked step-sisters!) Cinderella was quickly distracted by the royal messenger! While the prince kept dancing with Anastacia, Cinderella enjoyed herself being the center of attention of several admirers! Uh...Zcinderella...I zthought you vwanted the prince?...hiccup! When the dance finished the prince embraced Anastacia lovingly! Ooohoo! Cinderella! zsomeone is zsteeling your cake! ha ha...hiccup! Shut up Zayury! Nobody is stealing anything from me! Can't you see I'm busy with this yummy young thing?! Where were we handsome...mmmm! Suddenly the prince halted the music and stood at the front of the room to address his guests!

Thank-you everyone for coming tonight! I am ready to announce who I have chosen for a bride!
ANASTACIA! WILL YOU MARRY ME?!

Anastacia was momentarily shocked while her sister Drisella (thank-you again animcfly!) and her mother applauded! The royal messenger quickly consoled Cinderella!

Ugh! How humiliating, zthat had to hurt! hiccup! YES! YES! YES! I WILL MARRY YOU!

The prince crossed the room quickly and embraced his love again! Mean stepmother and Drisella happily watched the happy couple!
Unfortunately, they only lived happily for about 2 weeks...they divorced a year later...

Cinderella suffered for about 2 minutes the loss of the prince, and then SHE lived VERY happily ever after!!

YEAH! YOU GO GIRL!!

THE END
Zthank you for reading my zstory and being zsuch a vwonderful audience! hiccup! Now my family vwill have zto beg my forgiveness! I know I proved zthem wrong!! hiccup!

BYE BYE! KISSES KISSES!

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#63CyclonesueOct 11, 2007

I loved this, and I hope you do more! Very, very entertaining! \:D Sue

#64eshuffOct 20, 2007

Ok, finding something large and explosive that might be lying around and setting it off because IT IS SO GOOD!!!!

Love it!!!

Everything, the incredibly lush shots and well, what can I say...

Sleeping Beauty better wake up and grab her prince.

#65OpheliaNivalOct 30, 2007

Yeah Cinderella, way to supper! Hope the Prince made a prinup before the wedding. You should really keep on writing stories, these are hillarious \:D

#66sunny33Nov 8, 2007

ha ha so FuNnY\:D

#67sunny33Nov 9, 2007

\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

#68civetinjaNov 11, 2007

Great story ! \:\)

#69aaaaaaacJan 3, 2008

[Glitterfy.com - *Glitter Words*]

#70zmajceVIPApr 9, 2008

lol! you are Great, I mean you did prove....yourself \:\) Love the story!

#71cpyle822Oct 1, 2008

\:rah\: \:D \:D \:D I have never read such a well told completely different version of this story... My stomach literally hurts from all the laughing.

Great Job \:rah\:

#72goodie2shoesMay 4, 2012

That was most certainly worth the re-read. XD \:rah\:

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