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THE HUNT: Prologue
Published Aug 2, 2015


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JuliaBrunner

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For my next trick I try to get a story published on TSR...
Or not. I have tried and tried again and always ended up on my blog. But I'm not giving up, never giving up.
I don't think anyone knowns me here. I have published a story back in 2010 here, then lost my account and now I just keep publishing on my simblr, but would like to come back here. I love mystery and I decided this one will be perfect for sharing with you guys. Enjoy!
Before I start I would, once again, love to thank all the CC creators. You guys rock! Without you my worlds would be bleak.

XXOO
Jules

For my next trick I try to get a story published on TSR...
Or not. I have tried and tried again and always ended up on my blog. But I'm not giving up, never giving up.
I don't think anyone knowns me here. I have published a story back in 2010 here, then lost my account and now I just keep publishing on my simblr, but would like to come back here. I love mystery and I decided this one will be perfect for sharing with you guys. Enjoy!
Before I start I would, once again, love to thank all the CC creators. You guys rock! Without you my worlds would be bleak.

XXOO
Jules
We had everything…
Take a right. Run to the palace. Too many people… Get lost in the crowd….
We had each other.
Almost there. Just get into the crowd and take a cab to the safe house. Take a cab…
We had a home.
And you threw it all away.
I have two hours to get out of Copenhagen. If I don’t get out now, I won’t get out at all. But I still can’t move. All I can think about is: Where did we go so wrong?
You were my saviour. The only thing I believed in. I was your warrior princess, about to save the world from tyranny. You knew sooner or later I was going to dig too deep and someone will shatter out world.

And you choose to join THEM instead.
Get off your butt! Collect the files. Find all your IDs, don’t forget the fake ones. Burn everything. Every single thing about them, and you. Then grab the jump bag and run.
Get rid of your phone on your way out of the city. Throw it into the Frederiksholm Canal. Ignore the ringing. Ignore the…

‘Crap,’ I hissed, accepting the call with a stiff jaw.
‘Siobhan! Siobhan, where are you?!’ snapped his voice into the receiver harshly.

I cleared my throat, muttering, ‘On the run, apparently.’

‘Don’t be stupid. You can’t outrun this. Let’s just…’

‘No. I saw it. I saw all of it. What you’re doing, Eric… It’s not right. And we both know that I’m the next one. If I stay, you’re going to do the same to me.’
‘Don’t be an idiot. I would never let this happen to you. You’re not like them…’

‘I’m EXACTLY like them. After all, that’s why you stayed with me all that time, isn’t it?’

There was a beat of silence that did more to confirm my suspicions than the two goons chasing me all the way to my safe house. I snorted. ‘Right. Tell me about how you love me and how you’d protect me from this all.’
‘I DO love you, Siobhan. Forever.’
‘Screw you, Eric.’

‘Fair enough. But you got to know we will find you. There is no place in Denmark you could hide in.’

‘Just for the fun of it, let’s try,’ I snapped and without bothering to hang up on my fiancé threw the phone into the canal, watching it sink into the dark water. It sparkled like a falling star for a moment, then disappeared in the current.
‘Denmark,’ I whispered mockingly, turning to go. ‘Cute.’ I would’ve stayed for a moment to seep in the thrill of his understatement of my abilities, but I had a plane to catch. It was high time to visit the hellhole I crawled out of.
After all, the old saying went:
Every man has to make peace with the land of his ancestors before he dies.

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#1Senti88VIPAug 3, 2015

That was SO GOOD. Wow I loved the two slides 8&9 I loved how they correlated with each other and I love that your female lead seems strong and independent, but not cold and untouchable because she still has feelings. And super interesting too I can't wait for the first chapter!

#2urm0mAug 9, 2015

Love it \:\)

#3NisukiAug 9, 2015

Hello! Good to see you never gave up to try to publish on TSR hehe. Woa! Back in 2010 XD That's a long time ago.. I haven't been here on this site for that long haha.

Anyways, lets go back to the story =) I was putting question marks first how you set the beginning up of the story, but after a few pages I understood. You blended it in very well. I agree with Senti88. I love 8&9! They gave a great impact.
So I assume that our lovely lead is Siobhan who is some sort of supernatural, perhaps a vampire.. XD But the story could tell otherwise and this Eric.. he did something.. to someone similair to Siobhan.. I would think he's some kind of hunter.. =O!
Ah... A forbidden/weird looked upon love? Looking forward to see more!

#4s2702913Aug 12, 2015

Loving this so far and can't wait to see what is going to happen in this story. The screenshots look really nice and you have good writing skills. Also love a good mystery so bring it on \:D

#5AlessaFayeAug 12, 2015

the screenshots are amazing! I'm looking forward to reading your first chapter \:\)
love a good mystery.

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