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Sudden End - The Path (intro)
Published Aug 11, 2013


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Hello you!
You just clicked on my story "Sudden End". This is going to be my first one ever..
So hey, criticism, advice or anything like that would probably help me a lot for the stories that are coming later, but since this is still a lilttle intro it doesn't really matter.
My screens aren't the best yet, but I try!

Argh, I'm saying too much..
Anyways,
Enjoy reading!! and thanks to all the Artists for their wonderful CC!

Hello you!
You just clicked on my story "Sudden End". This is going to be my first one ever..
So hey, criticism, advice or anything like that would probably help me a lot for the stories that are coming later, but since this is still a lilttle intro it doesn't really matter.
My screens aren't the best yet, but I try!

Argh, I'm saying too much..
Anyways,
Enjoy reading!! and thanks to all the Artists for their wonderful CC!
Everyone walks on their own path.

Sometimes youíll have to choose between different paths. Which one will you take? It probably doesn't matter, because each path will lead you to a different future.
You might get influenced by many things around you; your friends, family or maybe your past is still haunting you or youíre worrying about your future. Sometimes you are walking a path together with someone.
Your friends? Your love? Or your parents, your dad or your mother?
Will you walk this path together and see the end, the goal you wanted to achieve?
What is your goal? Is it wealth? Happiness? Love? Something else?
But what if thereís an obstacle on your path? Someone that ruins everything? A fight with a precious person? Something thatís gone? What are the consequences?
Are you going through it or are you going to run away to search for another path?

Sometimes you are all alone, you feel alone. They.. everything is gone.
She cried, all alone. The loss of something important.
What if you lost the most precious thing in your life?

Do you feel the pain and sorrow?

What are you going to do? Where are you going? What's the point of going on anyways?
Someone comes near her and tries to comfort her. ďItís alrightĒ the girl said to the crying one. Do you have to accept someone who says itís alright? Do they even understand what youíre feeling? They donít know how it feels like, because they still have everything and you donít. But..

this someone might be a light in your darkness
Donít let the darkness blind you.
Donít walk away from the path you were walking.
If you push little by little, youíll get through and go on.
The girl kept comforting and said with a cheerful voice ďIím here! For youuĒ. Donít forget, the ones who are next to you.

And truly love you.
Thanks for reading,
Hope you enjoyed :]

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#2megumiRikazukieAug 12, 2013

whau! applause! this is a nice story to begin with. \;\) but, it has lots of questions and I can't stop myself for answering them. hahaha. \:D \:D lol. anyway, keep up this good work! I'll be supporting you!~ gambate!!! ^-^

#3stinkybutt123Aug 12, 2013

Brilliant start, I wonder where this story is heading, I'll definitely keep reading to find out! \:D

#4SifajerfAug 12, 2013

I really like this intro \:\)
I think this is going to be an interesting story!!
Looking forward to the next part \;\)

#5AlessaFayeAug 12, 2013

This is a really interesting start! I'm looking forward to the next part! \:D

#6HappyLizcat98Aug 12, 2013

its Interesting \:wub\: cant wait

#7CheeseYEAHSimsAug 13, 2013

Very interesting. I LOVE IT!

#8cmr34Aug 13, 2013

I like it \:\) you are talented simmer \:\)

#9lightsongAug 16, 2013

AWESOME! \:o

#10fruitopiaVIPAug 19, 2013

What a wonderful start to this story.

#11martoeleSep 11, 2013

Very nice style. Leukl! \:D

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