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Love Wish I
Published Dec 11, 2008


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Hi again!!!! It's been long since I wrote... I'm sorry, but I won't be able to finish the other story because I lost the data of the other story, I mean, houses, clothes, hairstyles, etc.. so, I apologize.

Let's begin with the story!

In this house live 3 people... but before it.... The owners was the grandma Sanz, grandma of Michelle and Antonio.

Since a long time, the Siblings went visit her grandma, but because of a sickness of Antonio, they decided to live in that house, that was also in the WILL of her Grandma... But in the WILL was another thing... to get the house and everything from her Grandma, they have to live with Grandma's friend... but who is this friend?

Hi again!!!! It's been long since I wrote... I'm sorry, but I won't be able to finish the other story because I lost the data of the other story, I mean, houses, clothes, hairstyles, etc.. so, I apologize.

Let's begin with the story!

In this house live 3 people... but before it.... The owners was the grandma Sanz, grandma of Michelle and Antonio.

Since a long time, the Siblings went visit her grandma, but because of a sickness of Antonio, they decided to live in that house, that was also in the WILL of her Grandma... But in the WILL was another thing... to get the house and everything from her Grandma, they have to live with Grandma's friend... but who is this friend?
Michelle Sanz

Since young she always had live writting, a great writer, compositor and also poet
Antonio Sanz

Because of his sickness, he can't compose anymore (HE IS BLIND), but he can play the piano and other instruments too
guy: Hi are you Cecil's granddaughter?

Michelle: Yes, I am, who are you?

guy: I'm his friend, Jake Amstrong

Michelle: ohh you are, come in.
Michelle: Hi Jake, right?

Jack: yes... I got informed yesterday about Cecil's will...so I think that you already know?

Michelle: Yes, we know.

Jack: we?

Michelle: Yes, me and my brother.... but pls sit.
Michelle: Well, you have to know that my brother is sick. no he is more like unable to see, but we don't know for how much time he is going to be unable to see

Jack: Ohhh I see... and who is she?

Michelle: She is Sheia, Antonio's pet, she is his guide, she barks when something is in danger or dagerous, etc.

Jake: Ohh great, because I also have a Dog, and they can be friends, his name is Rufus.

Michelle: Great

Jake: Hmm.. I will move in a week, it is ok?

Michelle: Ok.
After sometime

Jake Amstrong

The Grandma's Friend
A player but a great chef...
One week and a day after


Michelle: Hi Jack.. Did you sleep well?

Jack: Yes I do, thanks for asking. Can I ask you something?

Michelle: Yeah, sure.

Jack: Do you know that you and your brother are very alike to the duet of the Italian Singers... the ones that end their careers five months ago.

Michelle: Hmmm... you are refering to S&S (Sallaa & Sigma)?

Jack: Yes, they! Your face looks like Sallaa's Faces, is to bad that they stop, they were excellent!

Michelle: Hmmm really? I think so too

Jack: I have some of their disk, If you want I can borrow them to you?

Michelle: No thanks... hey are you hungry?

Jack: Something... Ohh I will cook you something that you may like.

Michelle: Ok
Michelle: It's good!

Jack: Yeah? Thanks, but it's sad that only we could eat it, Antonio can't, he is Allegric to shrimps and others seafoods, he can only eat fish.

Jack: Ohh ok, I will try to not cook seafood to make him able to eat my food, and you wouldn't going to be in the kitchen all the time.

Michelle: Ohh Okay...

Jack: Michelle, do you have plans for the saturday?

Michelle: Nop

Jack: Do you want to go on a Date? Just as friends

Michelle: Well, ok
Michelle decidd to cook one of the recipes of Jake Jake: Michelle, it ends fabolous at the end!

Michelle: Thank You Jake. Antonio, how was your visit at the doctor?

Antonio: he said that I'm better... now I can see some shadows... Now I can see this glass a little more clear than before.

Michelle: Really that's good!

Jake: Great for you Antonio!

Antonio: Thank you
In their date

Jack: Let's toast for you and your brother sickness, to be better than ever!!!!

Michelle:hahaha, ohhh my, you are so funny but thanks
They enjoy the night they dance together and realize their feelings he suddenly kiss her After a month

Jake: Hey Alex, I don't know what to do, I realized why Cecil want me to live here, but I'm can't continue living here, I fell in love with her granddaughter.

Alex: What? You the best player have fell in love? How?

Jake: I don't know, heer sweet personality, her kindest, she also love my dog!, and you know that he hate all the women with the ones I date and flirt, so it most be sign.

Antonio: What did you say?
Antonio: You the biggest player ever love my sister? You have to be kidding me?

Jack: Hey aren't you blind?


Antonio: If you remember I'm healing, I can see little by little, but don't chage the theme, I will no let you be near her, she suffered enough don't make her suffer more!!!!

Jack: what did you say?

Antonio: I won't tell you anymore, just leave her, don't get in a relationship with her, is the best thing that you can do.

To be continue

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#5jennnnnie02Dec 12, 2008

I'm not entirely sure what Jack/Jake's name is, but other than that and a few left out words, it was very good. \:D

#6spicyloveDec 12, 2008

\:rah\: great story can't wait until you update

#7tykijonesDec 12, 2008

cant wait for the update hey that rhymed but not on purpose

#8candy820Dec 12, 2008

Great Start. Waiting for the next part.\:D

#9dan2006 Dec 13, 2008

Im Hooked. cant wait till part 2!\:rah\:

#10charrayDec 13, 2008

Wonderful story \:rah\: \:rah\:

#11smiley00girlDec 13, 2008

I liked it! Keep it up!\:D

#12doggylvr6300Dec 13, 2008

It was great!!! But could you please tell us if it is Jack or Jake? Because you kinda kept switching between the two... Cant wait until the 3rd chapter!!!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

#13Hardyfan101Dec 14, 2008

Fight Fight Fight\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

#14bloodtieDec 18, 2008

That was great thanks.\:D

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