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House on the Hill (Introduction)
Published Aug 25, 2009


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liberty

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The story evolves around this house on the top of the hill in Riverview.

The story evolves around this house on the top of the hill in Riverview. Starring

Mrs. Turner
T Turner
F Brenny
B Brenny
C Prince
T Prince
On a day early in May, Tommy went to visit his old mother at the family home. When he arrived a nurse came to him, and said that his mother was dying. Tommy rushed to his mothers bedroom. Before he could speak a word his mother asked him to listen to her… just listen, and don't say a word! Tommy's mother started to tell.
“Tommy you know your father and I always said we were born and raised here in Sunset Valley. Your father did anyway … but I didn't! I was born and raised in Riverview. I lived there with my parents and siblings. I fled the town after my parents died under mysterious circumstances…”
“At City Hall there's a safe deposit box with my key to the family house. Take this…” She handed him a small peace of what appeared to be some kind of jewelry. Tommy held his mother’s hand and said: “ I promise mom, I love you…”
“ I love you too son... “ She passed away leaving Tommy behind with the item she gave him and a story about his family history. Tommy was confused about all of it. He would arrange his mother’s funeral and then head out to the town of Riverview to find some answers to the many questions he now holds.....
It was still dark when Tommy got up the next morning. Tommy packed up a few things, checked his old car and set off to Riverview. When Tommy drove out of Sunset Valley he saw a sign saying: “Riverview 3400 miles” Tommy never thought it was that far. But he made a promise to his mother so he pushed the peddle down. Maybe he could make it before nightfall. It was dusk when Tommy arrived at the outskirts of town. He had made it just before nightfall. Since it was dusk already Tommy assumed City Hall must be closed by now! Ah… well I'll go there tomorrow, but first I need something to eat. Tommy drove into town. He saw someone near the parking lot so he pulled over to ask the man directions. The man told Tommy to cross the bridge and then right on his left he would find a 24/7 dinner. Okay the man said clearly left but that's a office building?
Tommy was even more confused then before his arrival.
I believe I took a wrong turn, ''He thought''
He started to look around.........
Oh there it is,
I hope they’ve got some nice meals here.
After Tommy had something to eat he started to look around town.
Then he saw there was no hotel, motel or Inn anywhere.

I think that I've to spend the night on a bench again. It wasn't the first time for him. Only the last time he slept on a bench, he got arrested for doing so...

Tommy saw a cemetery behind the City Hall. It seemed to be a good place to take a nap there. He doubted that the police would come to the cemetery at night.
Tommy woke up early in the morning, it was around 5 or 6 in the morning and a beautiful morning it was.
It was a New day and the beginning of his historical Adventure.............

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#6AMERRINTHABLUE202Aug 26, 2009

Great,\;\)  cant wait for someting spooky to happen!

#7DuncXSep 2, 2009

Brilliant introduction and amazing screenshots. I look forward to reading the next chapter to see what he discovers. \;\)

#8Mike101Sep 12, 2009

Nice introduction. The house is really spooky

#9Wood_eLfSep 13, 2009

okay! lets see what happens next... great intro!!

#10AbsintheBessNov 12, 2009

Good first part - off to read the next bit now! \:\) -Bess

#11mpattonNov 13, 2009

A good beginning.  I'm looking forward to the next part.

#12charrayNov 14, 2009

Very good start \:rah\:

#13kalirinahNov 15, 2009

\:rah\: \:rah\:
just started to read this story today \:\) very good \:\)

#14TUTULANov 17, 2009

Great beginning and great screens too\:wub\: \:rah\:

#15candy820Jan 12, 2010

Good start!! \:D  Going to read the next part.\:D

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