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Bring Me To Life - Chapt. 3
Published Jul 18, 2010


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AnnieBoo

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This is the third chapter of Bring Me To Life. Stories appear om my mind just like a movie. Read and enjoy

This is the third chapter of Bring Me To Life. Stories appear om my mind just like a movie. Read and enjoy Alice: "Now, don't lie to me Alice II. What did you see in the room the other night?"
Alice II: *metalic voice* " I saw a ghost. A shining bright ghost. Is it so difficult to understand? Do you want me to draw a picture of it to you?"
Alice: "Very funny!"
Alice: "What was he doing? Why was he in our bedroom?"
Alice II: *metalic voice* "How am I supposed to know all these things? I promise the next time we meet i'll invite him for tea or dinner. You pay. I'm just an android..."
Alice: Oh...
Very far away from there...maybe in another dimension of time and space...
Holmes: " Excuse me, why are you following me, sir?"
Man: "Are you Sherlock Holmes?"
Holmes: "Yes, indeed, I am."
Man: "I need your services, Mr. Holmes. Something very important to all human kind was stolen from my lab."
Holmes: "You are a scientist?"
Man: "Yes, sir. Please, can you take the case?"
Holmes: "I can think about it. You may visit me at my house on Baker street tomorrow morning. Here is my card."
Man: Thank you, "Mr. Holmes."
Back to the present
Lord Western *thinking*: "He is back... I can feel it in my bones...I must stop him... He must be stopped!"
Lord Western *thinking*: This time he will never escape again. I shall capture him and put him in the box..." Lord Western *thinking*: He shall never make my life miserable again..." That night Alice had a very weird dream...she dreamt she was outside the manor in the mist... in the cold, but she wasn't feeling cold...she wasn't alone, though...she could feel the presence of someone Aidan: "Do not be afraid of me. I would never harm you, for you are my 'anam cara', my soul mate, my everything..." Aidan: "I shall be with you always, every day of your life, beloved..." Alice: "Aidan...?"

To be continued...

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#5LaSunriseJul 19, 2010

Fantastic chapter... I love your story \:wub\:

#6IllandryaJul 19, 2010

Oooh, ghosts, romance, mystery - and a very spiffy looking Sherlock Holmes. I'm enjoying this story and looking forward to more!

#7fabrizioammolloJul 20, 2010

This is a great story!

#8RatRaceRobJul 21, 2010

Great chapter/screens \:D Looking forward to the next!

#9MangioJul 24, 2010

Romance, mystery, fantasy? \:rah\: Its so perfect, what amazing screen \:wub\: Love the last one especially \:wub\: Can't wait for more

#10Simlight16Aug 10, 2010

Okay, I'm glad I found this chapter! But I hope that the next one is out soon!

#11cumryOct 19, 2010

I love your story its great, cant wait for the next one \:wub\:

#12emilymarie0201Feb 22, 2011

Love it<3 \:\)

#13xhaiiOct 17, 2011

as expected, another excellent chapter from you annie ^^
I'm really looking forward that you'd continue this story..I'm so loving it, the mystery,romantic thing, i meant the whole thing
with the time space, ghosts..who will come out next after sherlock holmes? Harry Potter? HAHAHA :P

#14eviNov 24, 2011

Beautiful story\:\)

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