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The Bloodvein Legacy
Published Jun 26, 2012


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iron mum

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Hi There. I’m Samara Bloodvein, yeh I know weird name but blame my dad. What can I tell you about myself – Everyone calls me Sam and I’m young, free, single and broke. The oldies (my parents) have this thing about kids, they keep having them and things got cramped so I thought I’d move out and see the world, err make that Sunset Valley. This is my new house, Mosquito Cove and the name isn’t kidding. I know I was thinking of lunch but I didn’t mean I was lunch. Anyway let me show you round. Wow this is… well….its cosy! This is the living room and that’s the kitchen. Once I have the place decorated and some furniture it’ll be nice. They say the Valley is a nice area to live. Low crime, always sunny and the wildlife is awesome – pssst I’ve heard there’s a unicorn around here; ha I’ll believe that when I see it.

Fist off I need a job, there’s a post at the local book shop for a cashier so I think I’ll go check it out.
Guess what…I got the job. Oh yeah, Oh yeah (do happy dance) so the money’s not great but it’s a start. I have plans, big plans. One day I’m gonna be rich and live in a big house and have a flash car, eh maybe two and a huge swimming pool and…. Okay first off I have to sort this place out like I need to get something to sit and sleep on. Well helloo. First day on the job and I meet a hunk. He’s name is Conner Frio, kinda sounds like the pastry you know Frio/filo and he is yummy. He’s a checker thingy for the local rag, I have no idea what that is.

Seeing me speaking to Cornelia Goth he warned me not to get friendly with her, I have no idea why, she seems odd but nice but I’d much rather chat to Mr Freaking handsome here. We did talk for a while and exchanged cell numbers, wouldn’t it be great if he rang.
Things are going well. I like my job, not love but hay what can a girl do. I joined the local gym in the hopes of making friends. I hope no-one notices how clumsy I am. I have a nice home and Mr Hunky rang, we only chatted and he’s not asked me out for a date but fingers crossed. Cornelia and I have spoken too, I know Conner said she is strange but she’s always nice to me.

The only thing is – well there’s not anything wrong just creepy. Have any of you seen the some of the locals I mean talk about peculiar; they have a strange look about them like they glow and their eyes – bizarre.
Cornelia came round one night. She was the same, goofy cloths, doom and gloom attitude but there was something I couldn’t put my finger on. I’ve learned all the Goths are eccentric. Her husband Gunther is some big CEO, their like the founders of Sunset Valley which is cool.

Cornelia seemed to be hungry but when I offered to make her something to eat she said she couldn’t possibly touch food. Maybe she’s a vegetarian or something. Anyway she was admiring my home and suggesting I maybe paint it to brighten it up which sounds fantastic – if I had money.
I suddenly realised that I would need a lot of money to fix this dump. Cornelia was really nice, giving me a hug and she seemed as upset as I as she was sniffing.

“Things have a way of working out” she’d said. I don’t know how, I couldn’t ask my folks for help as they’d just had another kid –twins. Cornelia rested her hand on my shoulder “Give it a few days. I guarantee that things will be different, you will be different.” I gave a pained smile and nodded.

Then suddenly Cornelia bit me. I mean fully, sink your teeth bit me.
I tried to pull away but she was strong, super strong. I screamed, pleaded then begged. She let go and I felt dizzy and sick. I staggered and I swear I saw red smoke and bats but that was probably from blood loss.

BLOOD LOSS! “You…you drank my blood?” Cornelia licked her lips and grinned “It’s really quite delicious.”

“But…but…..” She waved at me dismissively as she went to the door “Go to bed Sam, thinks will be different, better, you’ll see.” She was gone. Wirily I headed to my bed, too tired to think about the strange evening.
Two days later I padded into the bathroom and looked in the mirror. I Squealed. What on earth, I looked the same only different. My amber eyes glowed and my skin looked shimmery and - fantastic. In fact I looked better than I had since I was a kid. Wait a minute – Cornelia bit me, drank my blood. The locals with shimmery skin and glowing eyes and, I ran my tongue over my teeth, yep – fangs.

Vampires, they were blood suckers, creatures of the night and now I was too.

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#4OCIKITTENJun 28, 2012

really nice start. can't wait for the next part. \:cool\:

#5iron mumVIPJun 28, 2012

Hi fruitopia
Some people just don't listen until they get bit (pun intended \;\))
Thanks for reading and commenting

#6iron mumVIPJun 28, 2012

Hi OCIKITTEN
Life for Sam has been pretty good even with her new state of being but there'e bound to be up's and down's.
Thanks for reading and commenting \:D

#7bellaDDJun 28, 2012

This looks good \:P

#8iron mumVIPJun 28, 2012

Hi bellaDD
Glad you like it.
Thank you for reading and commenting \:D

#9starsky524Jun 28, 2012

Really good! Do you have Late Night? Because if you don't then where did you download the fangs and stuff? Thanks

#10iron mumVIPJul 1, 2012

Hi starsky524
I do have late night. If it has vampire's I get it \;\)
Thanks for reading and commenting \:D

#11SimplySarahJul 2, 2012

Please keep writing!

#12iron mumVIPJul 2, 2012

Hi SimplySarah
The next chapter should be up soon.
Thank you for reading and commenting \:D

#13oldmember_lucianna88Jul 4, 2012

I like it. Nice screenshots too

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