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ENOE - Ep 5
Published Oct 8, 2012


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Zafara

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[Welcome back!

My writing style has changed a little in this chapter - I'll be writing in 3rd person from now on. - sorry if there's any confusion :(

we're FINALLY getting to the good bit - who is this black haired capture?!

Let's find out..."

[Welcome back!

My writing style has changed a little in this chapter - I'll be writing in 3rd person from now on. - sorry if there's any confusion :(

we're FINALLY getting to the good bit - who is this black haired capture?!

Let's find out..."
??? : Ahh you're awake... Enoe : *cough* where...where am I? Who are you!? Where is Jake?!" ??? : "I'm glad you're awake Enoe. My name is Warren and I'm here to look after you." Enoe : *stands up quickly* "Mr Warren? Please where am I? Where is my dad, where's Jake!? why am I here?! - Tell me!"
Warren : "Please just call me Warren.

You're in an secluse underneath Bridgeport city central. You're dad and Jake do not know you are here. I doubt they will ever know."
Enoe : "I don't understand Mr Warren..."
Warren : "I don't expect you to."
Warren : "Listen Enoe. Don't worry about your Dad - but, Jack was not your friend. He is not an ally to you. Infact, I would concider yourself very lucky that I got to you before he did." Warren : "Now there are some clothes on the bed at the back of the room. Put them on and freshen up in the sink. I'll be back soon."

And with that Mr Warren left the room without a sound, leaving Enoe alone in a damp metalic room with nothing but a desk, a bed, a toilet and a sink. She was scared but she did as he said.
Doctor Waters *BURSTS IN* "Mr Raynolds - she's still not home! What should we do? Jake is missing too!"
Mr Raynold : *sighs* Doctor, I told you I would handle it - I appreciate your concern but I said that we would deal with Enoe and the boy and we're still in the process of doing that."
Doctor Waters : "I know you said you would deal with it...but she's gone and he's gone - and I need my daughter back, before it's too late." Mr Raynolds : *stands up* Doctor. There are some things that are better left unsaid, but please let me assure you. We are dealing with it."

Mr Raynolds stared firmly at Doctor Waters and gestured him out of the office.
Doctor Waters left, his heels scuffing the spotless floorboards. He was unsatisfied with the response. He was filled with dread, confusion and pain.

Doctor Waters :"Alright, let's do it the hard way..."
Enoe sat for a while in the warmth of her new track suit clothes. She stared around the room, it was bleak and she worried that this was the last thing she was ever going to see.

She thought about her dad. She regretted how she left things with him. And what was that thing that Mr Warren had said about Jake? Was he captured too? In a different room maybe?
Warren : "Ah great - you're dressed." Enoe stormed up, frightened but sure of what she was about to say.

Enoe : "You listen here Warren - if that IS your real name. I don't know what kind of sick games you are into but I will NOT obey you and I want a reasonable explanation to why you captured me and took me away from my family!?"
Enoe : "You took me away from a boy that loved me - a dad that loved me, sure a life that hit a slump. But surely I do not deserve your torture!" Warren : "Woah wooah little one. Calm down. You're in a sensitve state so I advise you to let yourself calm down. You are under my care - I don't plan on torturing you Enoe. I am here to help." Enoe : "What are you talking about?" Warren smiled at Enoe with such care that she was taken back at his silence.

Enoe : "What do you mean 'sensitive'?
Warren : "You're a very special girl Enoe and I've been hired to make sure that you stay special and stay safe. And unfortunately, keeping you away from everyone for a while is the best way to do that. For now." Doctor Waters had spent most of that evening on this computer trying desperately to find a clue to Enoe's location.

Doctor Waters : "She used to come home to sleep, so she must be in a position where she can't leave willingly..."

Doctor Waters knew that there was an easier way to track Enoe, but he couldn't risk the consequenses.
Doctor Waters stared at the option on his computer screen.

If he activated Enoe into a dormant state of her original programming he would be able to track down her through the GPS chip installed. But it was risky. If she was in danger, she could turn at the slightest emotional turn.
Enoe : "Special? Me? What a strange thing to say."

Enoe stared blankly at Warren hoping he would give her some more information but he stared back content in his silence.
And it was at that moment that Enoe felt safety and not fear. Warrens face was gentle and soft and his expression was calm.

Was she really as special as he claimed she was?

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#1kikialexaOct 8, 2012

Wow! awasome chapter! Keep up the story!

#2eviOct 11, 2012

Great chapter!

#3Bo0GeRBELLOct 13, 2012

Great arc! Did you make Warren yourself? If so, is he uploaded on the site? I would love to have him in my game! \:wub\:

#4ZafaraOct 13, 2012

@ Boogerbell

Haha. Yeah - I made him myself. If you want a download just say and I'll upload him \:\)

He's quite a character \;\)

#5fantasycloud17Oct 13, 2012


OMG HOW DID U PUT THE LETTERS ON THERE!\:confused\:

#6Bo0GeRBELLOct 14, 2012

Officially requesting! Please upload Warren! \:D Thanks so much!

#7ZafaraOct 14, 2012

@Fantasycloud

I added the text using photoshop \:D

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