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Instant Crush - Chapter 9
Published Oct 27, 2013


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Oli-chan

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Chapter 9 is here!

Sorry for the wait, I had gone on a small vacation to Halloween Horror Nights and Disney World! :D


Chapter 9 is here!

Sorry for the wait, I had gone on a small vacation to Halloween Horror Nights and Disney World! :D


Una-..she is getting worse.... all she does is sleep.

Regie- I don't know..... I don't know....

Una- Should she move in with Bill...maybe it will be better?

Regie- Maybe...but she does not even remember him... it's been six months and she is keeping him on a friend level...barley a friend..more of just an acquaintance.

Una-...she need professional help...... what about the Mental institution?

Regie-........Then we talk to Bill, see how he feels about it
Regie- Hey!... I...

Thomas-... yo... forget I was here?

Regie- Yea.... I... I'm sorry... just..

Thomas- I know..... Odette..

Regie smiled and looked over at the waffle he had burned.
Thomas-What is it this time?....

Regie shrugged and looked away.

Thomas- ...........What's on your mind?.... Regie...what is it?

Regie-....we are think about putting her in a mental institute?
Regie- before you think we are going behind Bill's back...I plan to talk to him.

Thomas-..... Just make sure you do. I don't want there to be anymore fighting between you guys.

Regie- I know.. but if he would just be paitent.

Thomas- He is... He is trying his best in being patient but... Odette is too special to him. Like you are to me.

Regie blushed and look away from him again.

Thomas- Now eat.
After Regie finished with breakfast with Thomas, he headed out to go home and get ready for their date. He said it was going to be very special and hopefully bring some happiness to everyones situation.

Una- Hey..

Reige- Hey
Regie- I am going out with Thomas tonight....but...if you need me to be here to Watch Odette I will..

Una- Haha no! You go out on this Date! You deserve it. Everything will be fine here, okay!
Regie- Thomas this is getting ridiculous...I need to go home to make sure Odette is okay...I...

Thomas- Just..one sec.......Where are they!?

Regie sat back down slowly in front of the restaurant they just finished their dinner at, she was waiting for the surprise that Thomas said would happen about a half an hour ago.
Thomas started to look around and become impatient.

Thoams- Okay.....they must of forgot

Regie- *giggle* who forgot what?

Thomas smiled.
Thomas stood up and pulled Regie up with him.

Thomas- I had a....whole thing planned for how I wanted to present this but...

Regie- Present...what?

Regies breath was caught in her throat.

Thomas- I love you Regie...
Regie- I.... I love....you too.

Thomas- I want to be with you
forever....and.....you don't have to become a vampire.....at least not yet.

Thomas smirked and slowly got down on one knee.
Regie- AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Regie screamed and jumped up and down.
Thomas laughed.

Thomas- So..Regie Malkave...will you marry me?
Regie- YES!! YES YES YES!! I WILL! I WILL MARRY YOU!!

Regie hugged him tight and tried to hold back her tears.
Thomas- I love you...

Regie squealed and had many thoughts running through her head. She couldn't wait to tell Una and..Odette.
An hour later

Regie- So... you want to move in together?

Thomas- Yes.... I think we should finally start OUR life...

Regie nervously looked around the furniture store. She felt excitement but was scared...she couldn't leave her best friend, and what about Bill...
Regie- What about Bill?

Thomas- I already talked to him

Regie- And....

Thomas- Don't worry... he was happy! He thought it was a great idea actually.

Regie spun around to look at Thomas.
Regie- Really!?... I...that's actually very relieving... I didn't want to make him even more depressed with us starting a life.

Thomas laughed and looked around the room.

Thomas- He.... thinks that with something great and happy going on it will help jog Odettes memory. Also he wants to help plan to keep himself busy,...you know..

Regie- Keep his mind off worrying? Well... I hope what ever he is hoping for comes true.
Una, Regie and Odettes Home the next morning

Una- Hey you guys are finally back! You know you could have called if you weren't coming home last night. I made a ton of food!!

Regie laughed and jumped at Una and hugged her.
Una- Whoa!...you are really happy. Like the old Regie is back! I suppose that something wonderful happened?

Regie- You knew!?

Una- Of course I did! and it was so hard to keep my excitement to myself!

Regie-....did Odette know?

Thomas- I asked her to keep her out of it...so when we have an engagement party, hopefully the surprise will help her out of her depression.

Una- Yes!... I think it's a good idea..and I am sssooooo happy for you guys!
Thomas- I am going to go home now...uh... I will call you later babe.

Regie blushed.

Una- See ya later!
Una- Um.... I didn't want to say anything while Thomas was here...I... it's Odette.

Regie- What!...what happened to her! Is she okay?!

Una- Yes yes... she is actually more than okay..

Odette- Hey guys!
Regie- WHA.... What happened!?

Una- Well she wanted to dye her hair and we did and...doesn't she look great now!!

Regie was at a loss for words... her friend looked more like her self than she did for that past 6 months.

Regie- how...do you feel dot?

Odette-....um...fine.

Odette then walked past the girls and up the steps.
Una- She is starting to dress up and actually talk to me....but... I can tell she is still depressed, but we are going in a good direction.. I think this party would be great! Her seeing Bill and the engagement announcement!

Regie- I hope so!
Bill and Thomas's House

Thomas- Hey!

Bill- So!...what did she say?!

Thomas- Yes of course!
Bill- That's great, did you see Odette?

Thomas- No, I only saw Una, she must have been asleep.

Bill- I see....
Odette- One of these and.....what's next?...AH!

Odette moved quickly in creating her potion. About a week ago she discovered the alchemy station in the room next to hers that the other girls had no idea about. She spent most of her days in there learning and experimenting.

Odette smiled to herself as she finished her potion.
Odette- Wonderful... this should help!

Odette finished her Relaxation Potion, she hoped that it would help take some stress off of Una and Regie with how hard they have been working.
Odette had also started drawing and most of the time she found herself creating images that looked familiar to her...like her friend Regie and two men who looked the same smiling. Her favorite figure to draw was a man she named William. He was a Tall dark stranger she'd knew she never met but always found herself adding to her drawings.
Bill and Thomas's house.

Thomas- no...he is asleep...why?...once he is asleep he is a pain to wake up, you know that babe.

Thomas tried to listen to Regie as she rambled on with a speed he never knew she could talk in.

Thomas- Just calm down and Tell me what's going on.
Thomas- What?....what do you mean?

Regie explained how after he had left Odette appeared before her and Una, dressed in unusal attire and acting like she was back to normal.

Thomas- So...does that mean she remembered everthing?!

Thomas heard Regies voice crack as she tried to keep her tears down and explain that she did not remember everything but that it was a great step forward to see Odette walking around the house and dressing up like she use to.
Thomas- Wonderful!!! Bill will be happy to hear that... though lets not tell him till they see each other at the party, maybe something will happen... The Girls' house

Mrs. Appleton- So I hear that you are creating potions....is that right?

Odette- Yes...I started about a week ago...how did you find out so quickly?

Mrs. Appleton- Your friends...so... I would like to sell them at my shop if you would like to come down and we can draw up a contract?

Odette-..umm...
Odette- I would love to...

The lady continued to not look Odette in the eye, as she scanned the house and looked at everything with disgust.

Mrs. Appleton- Wonderful... meet me there at 3 pm on Saturday.

She then left without another word.
Regie- Well... I didn't expect for her to be so weird when I called her and asked to meet you Dot...

Una and Dot laughed.
Dot went back to her alchemy room as the other girls began planning for a party.

Dot- It's in here somewhere....

Dot searched through the large booking, looking for the potion she had read about a few days ago, it was suppose to help with memory loss.
Though Odette wasn't interested in using the potion she decided she wanted to make it just in case all the looked Una and Regie began to become to much for her and she decides that maybe it would be better to remember....

Dot- What if those memories are bad......maybe they should stay lost.
Regie- Hey!.... your hair... it's so cute!

Dot- Thanks... I just decided to go with something new!

Regie- The cut is perfect...

Dot- Yea, I used my magic!
Regie- Your magic is back?

Odette-..hmm? Back.... what do you mean back?

Regie panicked a little...

Regie- I don't mean to freak you out....but do you still not remember that you use to be a fairy?

Odette- Fairy?...but I am a witch...
Dot- Why are you guys still telling me about fairies and vampires... I've always been a witch you know that....we went to high school together, right?

Odette smiled.

Regie- right...
Regie- Right!... So...about my party... Are you going to be around for it or...

Dot- Of course I will be there with you. I haven't done anything exciting in so long! It'll be fun!

Regie- Yes...fun!

Dot- Are any cute boys coming?

Dot blushed and Regie nearly lost he balance.

Regie- Yea!... there is this one guy I actually want to introduce you to!
Dot- Really? what does he look like?

Regie- You'll see soon enough.

Regie winked at her and tired to keep excitement down. Everything was going better than she had anticipated.
Coming up next!

Does Dot remember Bill?!

STAY TUNED! :D

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