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ZAYURY'S CINDERELLA part 2
Published Aug 29, 2007


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Zayury

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I give many thanks to all the wonderful custom content creators! Especially to the following for making my story possible!

Cyclonesue, Lianasims2, IcedMango, Sussisogoodsims, lliella, Rosesims, Serasims, lildebbye75, and you very kind readers for motivating me to continue with this story!

I give many thanks to all the wonderful custom content creators! Especially to the following for making my story possible!

Cyclonesue, Lianasims2, IcedMango, Sussisogoodsims, lliella, Rosesims, Serasims, lildebbye75, and you very kind readers for motivating me to continue with this story!

After doing all her cleaning and chores Cinderella would go to her room and look out the window. She had a great view of the beautiful castle in the village from there! She would wonder about the prince that lived there. It was rumored that he was a very handsome prince! I'm going to get me some...mmmm...ha ha ha!

CINDERELLA! You promised you would behave yourself! Remember PG13! Cinderella meant she would get some 'supper' little boys and girls, just supper..okay? Lets continue... A couple of days later an invitation to a ball was delivered to their home by a royal messenger! He presented the invitation to the mean stepmother. One, Two, listen up! The prince is looking for a bride and he wants to meet all eligible demoiselles! That is why he is hosting this ball! Wicked stepsisters One, and Two jumped up and down with joy! Now one of them would get to marry the prince! While they celebrated, Cinderella had a dreamy...?! Where's Cinderella? Mean Stepmother! Yes?

Where's Cinderella?
I don't know, Two have you seen Cinderella?

Mom, she was standing...
over there... I don't know where she went? What's that banging? Do you ladies hear that moaning?! OH NO! C I N D E R E L L A !!!!!!

GET DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW!!!!
Alright, alright!! I'm coming! Jeez! Maybe YOU need a little stress relie...

CINDERELLA!!
QUIET!! Considered yourself on a "DIET" from now till the end of your story, do you understand?! You are giving me a headache! FINE! You are giving me a pain much lower...#$@#...

THAT'S ENOUGH!!
Ladies and gentlemen, I am mortified... please excuse the interruption and let's continue with this "lovely" fairytale... While they celebrated, Cinderella had a dreamy look on her face wondering what she would wear to the ball? Cinderella, maybe if you finish all your chores you could go with us my dear! The day of the ball arrived! The mean stepmother and wicked stepsisters were ready to go! Cinderella was still washing dishes so she was left behind... Good-bye Cinderella, ha ha ha! Too bad you didn?t finish, ha ha ha! They think I didn't finish my chores, ha! There is only one way to make an entrance...SOLO baby! Ha ha ha!! Thank-you for reading this chapter! I will have the final chapter of this story in a couple of days. I have to take something for this headache right now. I must prove to my family that I am calm, cool, and collected! I will not beat the c.... out of a certain character! I am in control! Smile!

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#39LinasmultrolletSep 2, 2007

hehehe\;\)

#40loverienSep 3, 2007

LOL! That was so funny! I haven't checked in for a while & I almost missed it. Now I'm going to read Pt 3!

#41Lily Fairy2Sep 3, 2007

I loved it!! How pn earth did Cinders manage to get upstairs without anyone noticing?? I love the narrators interaction with the characters it makes it so much funnier!!! \:D \:D 5.0 I LOVED IT!!! \:D

#42NyellSep 6, 2007

lol, This is just... wow! One of my favorite stories in the site. I love your sense of humor\:D \:D \:D 5.5 of course

#43Nina_lorienSep 10, 2007

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA \:D \:D \:D I LOVE IT!!!!!!! This remake of Cinderella's story is the best ever!!!!!! It's great when they don't know where Cinderella is hehehe naughty girl LOL. Adore this story. Five stars!

#44CyclonesueOct 11, 2007

I've just been asked what I'm finding so funny at 5am in the morning, so I expect my partner will be reading soon too! This is just BRILLIANT writing! \:D Sue

#45eshuffOct 20, 2007

Again, unbelievably good. Brilliant and beautiful and so...looking for a word that's acceptable here no NOT that one...

So good. Period.

#46OpheliaNivalOct 30, 2007

Supper?! hmm, so that's what you kids call it nowadays \:P I love this, I always knew she was a... eh... supper-person?! Can't wait to see what happens next, and since I'm so late, I don't have to! \:D

#47civetinjaNov 8, 2007

Great story !

#48sunny33Nov 8, 2007

it was great!!!!\:D \:D \:D

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